braham116
like to read apocalypse novels and reincarnation,transported to another world etc. not a fan of romance but if the story good, then I'll read i guess.
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braham1161yrReplied to Claud_Greertl- braham1161yrCommented
question for author, does the entire novel keep switching POV or is it just the beginning?
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bro what's up with the constantly changing pov 😫, it's honestly getting annoying
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on PC they more spaced out than on mobile, only thing missing now is the commas, thanks for clearing that up for me
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I'll hop on my PC and see if it makes a difference
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for me, more than 1 person is considered a harem
'She is…noo, that won't be the case, right? Kathrine already likes Dilan.' She could only think while awaiting Yvonne's answer. - braham1161yrReplied to Franklin_Nwakamma
I'm on mobile, not sure if that changes anything or not
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question for author, does the story continue like this? just some of the paragraphs jumbled together without any commas or does it get better? I'm genuinely curious because I like the book so far (only on chap 1 lol) and it's kinda tough for me see where a sentence ends or pause
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'what's she going to do to me' he thought you can use ' for internal dialog
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this paragraph was kind of hard to read, everything was bunched up together
This paragraph has been deleted. - braham1161yrReplied to pabIoESCOBARA notification floated in front of him welcoming him back, there was also a countdown that represented how long his immunity would last for. When you rejoined the game, you were given ten seconds of invulnerability, giving you just enough time to get your bearings and plan your next course of action. This was implemented to stop you getting annihilated by monsters after just spawning in, but it also helped with getting spawn camped by players.
- braham1161yrReplied to BanjohamsterHe took a quick shower before getting ready for bed, he spent the next couple hours reading before his eyelids became too heavy to open. When he woke up, it was almost ten in the morning, his father and sister had already left for work, leaving Arthur to his own devices.
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space between the and majority
Unlike the mindless zombies that ran in a straight line, birds constantly moved sporadically, the new addition of the small woman with the bow couldn't possible keep up with them with such a short notice, Ailicia had used the majority of her knives in the fight before and wasn't able to retrieve the knives that were lodged into the zombies heads so her fighting ability was drastically reduce. - braham1161yrCommented
chap 107 an its only been a day 🥲🥲
The scene was just as he imagined it to be, not only was Noah excited, but he was beyond relieved. Seeing the apocalyptic city eased his heart to the fact the world was really as messed up as he hoped it was. There was no recovery from what transpired a day ago. No hope of modern civilization coming back within a few weeks of fighting back, this new world was here to stay. - braham1161yrReplied to _Avatar0FFury_
no specific amount, just says weight and equipments
Once he filled a bowl of water for Frosty, Claude began his usual morning workout of 50 squats, 10 pull ups, 10 push ups and 25 strict muscle ups. - braham1161yrReplied to _Avatar0FFury_
the paragraph above this, in the last sentence when he said "eyeing his weights and equipments..."
Once he filled a bowl of water for Frosty, Claude began his usual morning workout of 50 squats, 10 pull ups, 10 push ups and 25 strict muscle ups. - braham1161yrCommented
no harem tag right? RIGHT!?
'She is…noo, that won't be the case, right? Kathrine already likes Dilan.' She could only think while awaiting Yvonne's answer. - braham1161yrCommented
legacy charge...
#OH? Which one of these two younglings is your Legacy Charge?#