This novel has been truly amazing to read as of Chapter 28. Author is exceptionally creative with his system and how the MC uses it. Some of the comedic undertones are perfect while not over stressing or grim-darking (is that a word?) the world. On the topic of romance nothing has happened so far. It looks like the possibility of a poly relationship may happen which I wouldn't mind. So long as it's not another generic pokemon harem novel like the thousands of others on this site then I am good.

Ok so this novel started off pretty good but there were warning signs I overlooked. He does develop enslavement technology but since we was being all anti-hero I figured he would use it on those who deserved it. Nope. MC uses it only a teenager (the technology kills whoever it enslaves) then goes on to GENOCIDE AN ENTIRE COUNTRY. Yep. You read that right. He kills an entire country. Every man, women, and child no matter their innocence. And why does he do this? So he can use it as a future base....crickets.... He could have made a base underground, in the sea, in out space, on another fucking planet. ANYWHERE HE WANTED but instead he chose to wipe out a country. What. The Fuck? And author has the nerve to say the Ancient One would call him a good person. Lol no. He's a fucking psychopath.

If everyone in the relationship loves everyone else (physically, sexually, mentally, etc.) then it is not a harem. It is poly. If the MC only wants the women to love him and him only then it is a harem.

Is the Marvel tag a mistake? You can't have a fanfiction in the Marvel world and have locked chapters. That would mean your making money on Marvel without their copyright,

Can anyone who has made more progress comment if it is harem? Nothing against harems but I would prefer not to get started on it if it is.

So far really good story! Nothing about romance yet but we are barely 10 chapters in and it's not in tags so I won't take any points of for it. That said author if romance is ever involved please make it yuri (poly is fine too) and/or no harem. For everyone else please read and support the story. Oh for review summary it's Female MC with Sharrigan in Marvel (we don't know which Marvel AU and how good/bad it is yet) but already she looks like a fun and bright character. I would like to see a slight bit more concern over her transition from her previous life to now but granted she hasn't exactly had enough downtime to think about that so far. Also just slightly. Not super emo but enough to acknowledge why she does or doesn't care about who she was before.

Does anyone know where to find the omitted words? I tried Lofter and AO3 but couldn't find the author.

Well as much as I just don't understand why people hate Yuri I can still accept an author doesn't want girls kissing in his novels. My biggest pet peeve is Yuri is not poly. Using the term that way is just wrong and misleading but many authors do it. Also you are entirely right about the inability for a harem to function without poly above 2 women. IMO when I read about large harems like this I just believe the MC is being cucked behind his back somewhere and doesn't know it. That is unless the story goes full slice of life and he spends every day pampering his 10+ wives/girlfriends/children.

Was the novel not tagged with #SLICE OF LIFE when you wrote your review? Because if it was then your review about t*nsion is the equivalent of complaining about an author having a female MC lead when the tag says #FEMALE MC LEAD slice of life doesn't do tension. That's kinda the point.

人在美漫，旅行青蛙带回帝皇铠甲

Hmm there were reportedly other wizarding communities with their own specialties around the world. Sure the Dark Lord was something special in the UK but that doesn't make him a global threat. And this is only if we think HP is a pure universe. That is to say no mutants, significantly stronger other species or sorcerers.

If this is a male lead how can it be Yuri? At best it's poly but Yuri? Not even a little bit.

I think I found it "Daisy in the Marvel Universe" by Author: Wanting the Quiet Don River 黛西在漫威世界

It's a really good novel but the Romance tab is very misleading. There is no romance at least not as of 250ish chapters. There are some romance-bait suggested scenes but only as think as a fresh layer of dust. The author has comment "no romance" at one point and "late romance" at another point so I am not sure which it is. And if it is late romance then are we talking late as in 400 chapters or late as in my grandkids will read about it?

Seems I can't edit my spelling mistake. This should say read them so you don't have to. (Starts at Chap 8) "...The MC knows his recent GF (who he has NOT had sex with yet which only makes it .01 slightly less NTR ish.) ..."

Ok so everyone is shitty about NTR. I GET IT. I HATE NTR TOO. But I REALLY wanted to know why the author thought it wasn't NTR that much although so many reviews say so. So I found the chapters and read them so you don't have to. (Starts at Chap 8) So here is the summary. If you can accept this then go ahead and read it. Story is fairly good otherwise so I am looking forward to the rest. IF I see a SINGLE OTHER F*ING INSTANCE OF EVEN SLIGHT NTR'ISHNESS I'll come back and edit this review and never read another page of this novel. Summary (I'll try to keep it generic): The MC knows his recent GF (who he has had sex with yet which only makes it .01 slightly less NTR ish.) is part of a hentai NTR manga from his ordinal world. He knows he is about to be NTR'd but it hasn't happened yet. He follows her to see if it is about to happen and hopes she's a decent person but everything starts to happen just as in the manga. He interrupts them before penetration (generally speaking her scenario is semi if not full on raped) and gets some immediate revenge on said dude. Revenge is satisfying as you many have seen others post. That's pretty much the gist of it. If you can read/accept/get past that then enjoy the novel if not then DO NOT READ. Again if I see a SINGLE OTHER EVEN SLIGHTLY NTR thing after this I'll come back her and edit this post with the chapter and drop the review to 1*

Hi Is there a way to support you directly? I.E. not through this site? Great novel and love that it is yuri. Can't wait to see what else you can come up with!

Ok. A messy room smelling like roses needs more something. It's like saying this roadkill smells like pancakes... I'm sure you have a perfectly valid reason in your head as to why Yui's room is messy and smells like pancakes (maybe foreshadowing something later on?) but as it's written it does make me go.... wat?

Me again. So nothing really wrong with this paragraph and your writing is very well done but... (yes I know we all hate buts) but.... This feels like a tragedy that became even more tragic with the mother yet it is just.... glossed over. You could spend a few more paragraphs or even a page delving into the truly tragic nature and emotional scarring of what just happened to Yui and this would also conveniently lead to her own future Isekai'd death. Maybe leans a little bit towards a cliche'd direction but still doesn't need to be just glossed over.

Hi. I am going to offer some comments as I think this is your first novel and I would like to give some *I hope* constructive criticism. I am NOT an author or even a writer so please don't take what I say negatively or as someone with experience. I just read your work and see potential so I hope my comments help. That said here is the first one. I am not sure why Yui starts off at 15 and the next paragraph jumps immediately to 18. There doesn't seem to be any significance to her 15 year old life so... why not just start the story where she turned 18?