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Bad. Just bad. Really dumb wet rag mc. Type of guy that would find out his girlfriend is screwing 10 other guys and then go “well I like having a gf so I’m not going to do anything about it”. Seriously, all the chapter comments are people complaining about how dumb the mc is, and yet author just keeps saying “wait”, but never changes anything.
Writing is fine, story is really bad. The strength of each character holds zero weight to how fights happen. Every single fight is “near death” regardless of weather then enemy is 10 levels below or 50 levels above. Also, unless you like nothing but endless tragedy, you’l hate the story. The story goes from 50% completed to finishes in like 5 chapters. Author clearly got bored and just vomited the ending.
Your pet peeve is stupid, and definitely a ”you” problem.
Dumb. Why could the specter smell the eggs while they were in a complete different dimension, when a more power being from a higher level World couldn’t sense anything? The mission also said he only needed to stop the specter not kill it. Either the system was mistaken or lying. the forced plot point that allowed the specter to somehow communicate while imprisoned is dumb.