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author-san, some people may say that you have spent too long on the tunnel ball arc. these people if they exist are wrong. everything you write is a joy to read. RISE OH DARK ANTHONY!

It's fun, as always, and as expected! I'd say there's not a huge need to poke quite so much fun at the Chinese overthetop descriptive idioms, but that's what works for you, so I should shut up and let you get on with creating the magic I love!

faster than a what?

sorry to hear it's rough bro. especially when you're low on $ it's hard to justify therapy, but solo or couples therapy could be a good idea. story is going well, I think this floors idea is good. and it's nice to see his old items/skills back! I wonder what form his ship will take this floor.

awesome :) no rush, I'll stay along for the ride [img=recommend] take your time.

what do you mean, actions have consequences? :o good writing :) but if shizu wants to walk away from some responsibilities, it's not so bad. also very fixable if she does want to keep princessing, I feel like without vesper, they'd probably revert back to neutral. I wonder if shade and maruki will stay if she's not a princess!

Vesper is far from blameless, putting a potentially unstable energy source directly below her city while she experiments on it. but I like that you introduce consequences/morality in an important, but also avoidable/ignorable way! classic gaming ignorance :)

I know you don't get much feedback. I only started reading recently, but have really enjoyed it. thanks for going as long as it has! and keen to see a book I like actually reach an ending (premature as it may be)! xo

hey author :) you've made it to chapter 150! well done, definitely a milestone to celebrate. the story and writing are going well, keep up the good work. remember to take care of yourself too! xo