Them negative folks are not your real fans, if they are rude and respectful they are hater’s who are jealous of your talent at weave a very good story with interesting characters. Keep up the good work and get well.

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Hope you get well soon.

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There is nothing wrong with the pace of the story or the characters development. Keep up the good work.

Some of the battles are to long for no reason and the MC though process during combat makes no sense.