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  • Phavalve
    Phavalve6mth
    Commented

    🙏 spell "weird" correctly 🙏

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    Shadow Slave: Diaries of a Stranger in even Stranger Lands
    Book&Literature ¡ John_Doe_777
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  • Phavalve
    Phavalve6mth
    Commented

    🙏 fix the spelling on "weird"

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    Shadow Slave: Diaries of a Stranger in even Stranger Lands
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  • Phavalve
    Phavalve6mth
    Commented

    It's spelled "weird", please spell it correctly in later chapters.

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    Shadow Slave: Diaries of a Stranger in even Stranger Lands
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  • Phavalve
    Phavalve6mth
    Commented

    when you spell "weirder" make sure to put the "e" before the "i"

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    Shadow Slave: Diaries of a Stranger in even Stranger Lands
    Book&Literature ¡ John_Doe_777
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  • Phavalve
    Phavalve8mth
    Commented

    Dude, author, you go between "Gabriel", "Hassan" to "Darth". Pick one please.

    Boba ran his hand over his father's breastplate, trying to hold back trembling lips with his other hand. Gabriel saw that he wanted to cry again, just like when he found the body in the arena, but he was trying to hold it in. Fett removed his hand from his face, bit his lower lip, and began to undo the straps on the armor. Hassan was impressed by the boy's willpower; if he were in the same situation at that age, he would probably lie down next to his parent's corpse and wait for his own death. Even in his early years, the future bounty hunter showed his strength. Someone like Boba Fett would undoubtedly come in handy for Darth in the future.
    Star Wars: Darth Hassan
    Movies ¡ Vandalizer
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  • Phavalve
    Phavalve10mth
    Commented

    You meant "vehemently" not "violently".

    Silver had actively helped Steven build his pokemon team. His brother had been planning to get a Lileep and Anorinth as resurrected from fossils he had found during his journey and Silver had protested the choices violently since Devon would be the one that would resurrect the pokemon, Silver had gotten his brother to trade the fossils from the ones that were already in the inventory.
    Silver Stone: I Became Steven Stone's Little Brother!!!
    Anime & Comics ¡ dukeofvirtue
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  • Phavalve
    Phavalve1yr
    Commented

    +1

    1- Join Straw Hats
    One Piece: My Wife is Nico Robin
    Anime & Comics ¡ Normal_Dude
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  • Phavalve
    Phavalve1yr
    Commented

    You spelt his name "Kaiden" instead od Kieran.

    Ch 21 The Forest of Beasts' Change
    Zenith Online: Rebirth of the Strongest Player
    Games ¡ ApexPen
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  • Phavalve
    Phavalve2yr
    Commented

    his response to the action was one of the stupidest ones I've seen.

    Ch 223 Unwilling
    Dimensional Descent
    Fantasy ¡ Awespec
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  • Phavalve
    Phavalve2yr
    Replied to Granville4554

    it's guyver. I accidentally put a space

    Ch 80 Chapter 80 Infinity... Black Hole!
    One Piece: My Infinity Gauntlet!
    Anime & Comics ¡ Levaa
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  • Phavalve
    Phavalve2yr
    Replied to Granville4554

    guy very i think

    Ch 80 Chapter 80 Infinity... Black Hole!
    One Piece: My Infinity Gauntlet!
    Anime & Comics ¡ Levaa
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  • Phavalve
    Phavalve2yr
    Posted

    nice job stealing a novel that you didn't write. ....

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