I love the part where she said "her kindness was going to drag her into the quick sand". love ur story all the time, no dull moment when reading through. well done Ash.
Awwwn...so sweet,I really feel fr both Zavian and Neera. the journey isn't gonna b sweet fr both of them. I feel Jasmine is cunning and not been sincere. well done Author.I love every bit of it.
this is a very good story but too many errors.a writer should take his or her time to cross check before posting what they ve written or maybe it needs a good editor to edit this story.