So, I of course drop this. This is obviously a torture fanfic. Created by Masochist, Sadist or both. The Slave thing is just way too disturbing. If I were him, when I would meet her, I would hope, she isn't smart enough to not allow me to kill myself and then kill myself. Even if she were the kindest Women in the World, she could only live far away from me. And there's no way to turn this thing into a wholesome relationship either. It will always be unequel. This so disturbing that it brought me to write a comment. I rarely do so.

Superb Fanfic. I can see so many possibilities with this. First the system is amazing and I can see how strong it matches with the supernatural verse. A World filled with abillities to take. I hope the Author doesn't drop this, tho he will, because all do.

You probably mixed up two different fics in your head.

Do you get off on making your Main character go through despair? I had enough of this already, by the first time. If you want to write a torture story, just say so. This gets old. I hope you don't do the same thing again.

Your btw right. I ate a dog zoan fruit and am therefore a Dog - Human.

I hope he doesn't get a Harem. It would ruin the story.

Well, is just a shit story, where nothing makes sense. But is still funny though. They get strong fast and there a lot of Plotholes. But who cares. It's all about slaughtering and having fun with it.

Did he just used the legendary "You" Argument? Just a Genius. It's not like that are things that little children do. No. That is just Mastery.

He is just the best. All his argument is "You are a dog" thats it. Genius. How can he have such a high IQ? It doesn't make him look stupid at all. This is the Answer which will win everything. "You are a dog" will revolutionize every Argument. A future Argument will look like this: "Hey, why are you always like this?" "You are a dog" "No, you are a dog" "No, you are a dog" ... I look forward to the arguments in the future.

I think it is one of the better written one piece fanfics. The main character is likable and not a scum. He isn't completely overpowered. Although I don't like it when the main character is a member of the strawhats, because the world is so big and its a shame nothing of it will ever be explored, but he atleast doesn't remember the adventure, so he doesn't make the adventures less fun. I like to see how with him being here, it makes the adventure a lot easier. I hope it don't get dropped that fast so we can reach zou and wano. The main character meeting other shinobi. I look forward to that. All in all it is written realistic and I hope he doesn't eat a devil fruit.

I don't know how to describe this review. It's just not true. First he is in contact with her and they talk to each other atleast every 3 days via ten ten mushi. Second, he can't just not go on adventure anymore just because he has a Girlfriend. I think it's quite normal to leave the girlfriend behind while sailing and he has atleast contact with her not like most pirates in One Piece. Third you can argue that he shouldn't have gone in a relationship when he knew, he will let her behind. But he is obviously a pirate and will never stay on one place all the time, meaning with this logic he would be always single.

I appreciate, that you not only thought of a reasonable bounty for Jon, you also thought about reasonably changes at the bounties of the crew and not just copied all of them.

There is no way merry could survive the new world, so better take goodbye early than latter.

Good, but you forgat one thing. He doesn't even know One Piece and all characters in it, because his mind was cleared from all memories related to them, so how can he be fanboy and want to lick luffys ass if he doesn't even know them. You clearly did not even read this fanfic.

Boy, thats just a dumb review. I hope the author don't take stupid reviews like this to the heart. He is Luffy's dog, because he joined his crew? Joining them makes him not a dog. That just shows that he likes having friends instead of catching all women in One Piece and making a crew out of it like most thrash fanfics on One Piece.