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Dragon5162

Dragon5162

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26 yr old fantasy/fan-fic addict

2018-09-21 JoinedUnited States
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  • Dragon5162
    Dragon51623d
    Replied to Nen_pin

    parts of the chapter

    It didn't bother me at first, but then I noticed father was pushing Hinata as hard as he was pushing me before. Hinata was weaker than me and had a hard time keeping up with the training. I finally snapped when I saw Hinata cough out blood, and father didn't seem to care as he continued to attack her. Later on, I went to talk to him. Just as I was about to enter the room father was in, I changed my whole aura, making it more intense.
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    Hinoka Hyuga
    Anime & Comics · Nen_pin
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  • Dragon5162
    Dragon51624d
    Commented

    more repeats

    With a smile, I said to Neji, "Thanks for the training. Bye!" before running off to find Naruto.
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    Hinoka Hyuga
    Anime & Comics · Nen_pin
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  • Dragon5162
    Dragon51624d
    Commented

    repeated

    It didn't bother me at first, but then I noticed father was pushing Hinata as hard as he was pushing me before. Hinata was weaker than me and had a hard time keeping up with the training. I finally snapped when I saw Hinata cough out blood, and father didn't seem to care as he continued to attack her. Later on, I went to talk to him. Just as I was about to enter the room father was in, I changed my whole aura, making it more intense.
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    Hinoka Hyuga
    Anime & Comics · Nen_pin
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  • Dragon5162
    Dragon516218d
    Commented

    This is a extremely horrible cliffhanger

    Ch 67 Chapter 67: Strange Predicament!
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    DxD: As a Gamer In Filthy World
    Anime & Comics · Orael
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  • Dragon5162
    Dragon516219d
    Commented

    I'm sad to see this get dropped. I genuinely enjoyed this fic.

    Ch 46 Dropped - Sorry
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    Scholarly system in Faerun
    Video Games · B0nfire
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  • Dragon5162
    Dragon51621mth
    Replied to SavageKirin

    i had the same thought

    2: MC vs Logan is a brawl rather then weapons so no blood left behind
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    Marvel: Tech System
    Anime & Comics · Unknown_To_All
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  • Dragon5162
    Dragon51621mth
    Commented

    Should have what's being said in ” to make it easier for people to know when someone is talking. It makes it stand out more in my opinion. example: "Good morning, how are you?"

    ROB: Good morning, Abel, as you can see, you may be thinking, I am Rob, an immensely powerful being, I am part of a legion of omnipotent beings, but who are immensely bored.
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    Ice King (Harry Potter fanfic)
    Book&Literature · FanboyDeowerpower
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  • Dragon5162
    Dragon51623mth
    Commented

    Started to repeat

    This paragraph has been deleted.
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    My Hero: The Vixen
    Anime & Comics · PaperGod
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  • Dragon5162
    Dragon51626mth
    Commented

    I dont like how this turned out, but its not gonna stop me from reading.

    This book has been deleted.
  • Dragon5162
    Dragon51626mth
    Commented

    force user

    (Which path do you think Jial will take?)
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    Star Wars: The Yautja
    Anime & Comics · ForestOfDarkness
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  • Dragon5162
    Dragon51627mth
    Commented

    Conversations should be the only thing that use "talking" while thoughts should use 'think'. By doing so you make it easier to tell when someone is thinking or talking.

    Ch 3 Chapter 3: Leo's Accidental Magic. ( Rewritten).
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    Harry potter :Stifen Grindelwald
    Movies · Sanjay_K_L
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  • Dragon5162
    Dragon51628mth
    Commented

    same chapter twice in one chapter

    Ch 19 Ch. 19: The Unforgivable Curses.
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    Multiverse's Ghost Rider
    Movies · TheMightyZeus
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  • Dragon5162
    Dragon51629mth
    Commented

    Horrible.

    Cornelius looked at the now-dead body of his supposed friend with a smile still on his face and said ''Sorry buddy, it was nothing personal. but I can't bear to eat another damn apple on this island'' Cornelius then picked up a knife and handled it deftly between his fingers
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    One Piece : Satan
    Anime & Comics · DiaboV
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  • Dragon5162
    Dragon51629mth
    Commented

    I don't mind since I think it would make gathering abilities easier at times

    Ch 10 question!
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    Marvel: I can Steal Abilities
    Anime & Comics · StarGate
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  • Dragon5162
    Dragon51629mth
    Commented

    1

    -Ororo Munroe
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    Marvel: King of Winter
    Movies · Torhelm
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  • Dragon5162
    Dragon51629mth
    Commented

    Feels like a forced nerf since such a thing shouldn't have been possible.

    Ch 9 Chp 6
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    Overlord: The Dragon King
    Anime & Comics · HiTherefic
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  • Dragon5162
    Dragon516210mth
    Commented

    Why is everything a conversation?

    Ch 47 Chapter 47: Immense Power
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    devouring uchiha shisui at the beginning
    Anime & Comics · 5834
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  • Dragon5162
    Dragon516210mth
    Commented

    I'm hoping she gets a gible.

    Ch 258 The mission Pt. 1
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    Valkyrie Potter: Pokemon Journey
    Anime & Comics · Bloodykitsune1997
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  • Dragon5162
    Dragon516211mth
    Commented

    Are hybrid dinosaurs included?

    I'm out of work in an hour and I plan on writing 3 chapters tonight. 2 things I think I figured out who I want the female lead to be, and what his summon contract will be. to make this fun if you can guess the correct girl I'll write an extra chapter tonight. related unrelated how do you guys feel about dinosaurs?
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    Reborn In Naruto As An Experiment
    Anime & Comics · Balthizar_Blake
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  • Dragon5162
    Dragon51621yr
    Commented

    repeated parts of the story

    Ch 10 Armed break in
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    In DC with the ability’s of rainbow six operators
    Anime & Comics · Kaguya_otsutsukii
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