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The end of the sentence “familiar telltail signs”
First word should be “They”?
Last sentence , change “not weild” to “to weild”
Change “sword “ to “sworn”?
Change “Go pointed” to “She pointed”?
Insert “only,” after “appearances”
“Gunk” or “Gunt”
Last sentence is a bit weird!
Change “withing” to “within”
Lasr sentence, change “waster” to “waste”
Should read “Her smile was genuine….”
Change it to “I handed it to her and….”
What is “thotness” ?
“an accomplished” is it a level of skill or should “an” be deleted?
Something to fix in this sentence
Two “Gunks” in this paragraph
“Gunk”
“Gunk” Again, is it a new nickname ?