xpi6ish
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Cogito ergo sum!
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xpi6ish8mthCommentedCh 1816 Progress Underground- xpi6ish9mthCommented
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Ice Moon Valley's Zheng Shijiu: Late Foundation Establishment Stage. She mainly cultivates the Thousand-Mile Ice Seal. She is decisive in killing and looks down on the Heavenly Joy Pavilion.] - xpi6ish9mthCommented
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Heavenly Joy Pavilion's Lou Feng: Middle Foundation Establishment Stage, close to breakthrough. She mainly cultivates the Heavenly Joy Fallen Immortal Path. She can cause one's mind to fall into chaos. - xpi6ish3yrCommented
"whereabouts" not "wear abouts"...
"Mn I agree. For now, let's keep trying to track her wear abouts while dealing with the Ancient Terror." The 5th sister agreed as everyone seemed to have come to a consensus. As for the heroes, Tenma, Nyer and Aris seemed a little unsettled to find out that the strongest sister was the one who had been working with the Ancient Terror so they would exchange subtle glances towards one another. - xpi6ish3yrCommented
"drawers" not "draws" ...
"Nothing aside from feeling super tired afterwards." Beril replied while grabbing a golden liquid from one of her draws. - xpi6ish3yrCommented
"crafted" rather than "craved"?
The armour itself wasn't exactly craved with art in mind since they were rather plain and worked around efficiency rather than fancy looks. The fanciest thing that Shiro could pick out was probably the waist piece that acted as a second skirt since there was cloth attached to the armour. - xpi6ish3yrCommented
Sigh, "... wouldn't care less...", but "... wouldn't care at all..." even better.
Only then did Su Ru relax. "You're his servant, so just dedicate yourself to serving him. Keep all the thoughts that you have to yourself because he's very important to Lady Xiao. If he's unhappy, I would care less if you got punished!" - xpi6ish3yrCommented
"cast", not "casted"
“Young man, I need you to collect 3 items! After you’ve collected them, I shall be able to create a relic capable of purifying the dark force casted by the Demon King and revive Calina’s soul!” Faylon spoke in a deep voice, “This mission is very difficult. Are you willing to take on this responsibility?” - xpi6ish3yrCommentedCh 635 Mio's Sword Skill