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Edgy_Elite

Edgy_Elite

Lv15

Lazy lover of all good stories. Also a perfectionist in regards to his own work

2018-09-21 JoinedGlobal
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  • Edgy_Elite
    Edgy_Elite2mth
    Commented

    I dont believe Danzo had Shisui's eyes. Weren't they given to Itachi to ensure they didnt end up in his hands?

    "Utatane Koharu and Mitokado Homura, these two should not be that difficult to kill… I don't believe that either of them would be as strong as a Kage, perhaps at the level of an Elite Jōnin, and maybe a little trickier, but nothing more than that… but Sarutobi Hiruzen and Shimura Danzō… these two would be very difficult to kill. Shimura Danzō is probably the second strongest person in Konoha at the moment, not counting Jiraiya, not to mention he has all those Sharingan that he would most definitely implant in his arm for Izanagi… which means if I have to kill him, I have to kill him eleven times… no wait, he also has Shisui's Mangekyō Sharingan which he can also use to cast Kotoamatsukami on him other than Izanagi, so maybe twelve times… and his subordinate Anbu wouldn't watch me kill him time and time again while sitting, they would definitely interfere…
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    Naruto: As Uchiha Sasuke
    Anime & Comics · Novachrono_Agares
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  • Edgy_Elite
    Edgy_Elite3mth
    Replied to Mr_Jak

    and if they stole the Saiyans genes.. my god

    Ch 45 A Plan For Survival.
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    Saiyan in Warhammer
    Anime & Comics · SrDevoxero
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  • Edgy_Elite
    Edgy_Elite5mth
    Commented

    Welcome back! anxiously awaiting next chapter ngl

    Ch 15 Something Amiss
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    RWBY May Cry
    Anime & Comics · GhostPilgrim
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  • Edgy_Elite
    Edgy_Elite10mth
    Commented

    wouldnt be said to a child. He would most likely just say his eyes were special and left it at that

    "Well, to put it simply, you have special eyes, your eyes are something most would see as a myth, the sage of six paths had those same eyes, that's why I'm here to train you, I'll help you use your eyes without hurting somebody you care about."
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    The Eye Of Samsara: Reborn!
    Anime & Comics · The_Hollow
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  • Edgy_Elite
    Edgy_Elite11mth
    Commented

    this is really good work. im anxious to see what this turns into. keep it up!

    Ch 6 Chapter 6 - Miss Militia
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    Will of The Force (Star Wars / Worm)
    Movies · CaptaoCav
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  • Edgy_Elite
    Edgy_Elite1yr
    Replied to thecrazy14

    rip tzeentch, he will forever be scheming to take this story and mold it in his own mefarious way

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  • Edgy_Elite
    Edgy_Elite1yr
    Commented

    People dont understand characters to hit rock bottom before they reach the top

    Oh and I got a one-star review earlier because, and I quote, "MC is such a weak willed person with no backbone" and I know this chapter is gonna get me more of 'em for similar reasons despite what I said in the synopsis. So please show your support if you like the story so far. I'm not begging for five-star reviews or anything, just supportive comments and maybe a few powerstones lol. Heads-up to those of you who will no doubt make a one-star review because you don't like the character. Don't. If you're only reason for not liking a book is the protagonist, just stop reading the book. Don't tank the rating of the story because of your own personal preferences. I gave you a warning in the synopsis, so if I see any reviews that *only* talk about how shitty the protagonist is, imma delete 'em. Sorry not sorry.)
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    DCAU: Saiyan
    TV · Online_Writer
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  • Edgy_Elite
    Edgy_Elite1yr
    Replied to Edgy_Elite

    although the two weapons are very different in their roles so not the best comparison

    Stretching his hand, he ignored the staff and daggers and immediately grabbed onto a katana that seemed to have been forged out of the blackest material in the universe. It was almost invisible because it absorbed all light that touched it, but Lloyd could still feel its presence.
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    The Walker Of Voids
    Urban · Animosity
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  • Edgy_Elite
    Edgy_Elite1yr
    Commented

    interrupted? So.. he wants to mess with his teammates so they wake up? Respects to him

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    Naruto: Marionette of Suna
    Anime & Comics · TeemVizzle
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  • Edgy_Elite
    Edgy_Elite1yr
    Commented

    Building new PC's are fun. what's your build? I used to build them for cash

    Ch 362 Into the Tower
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    The Ruined Death Knight
    Fantasy · Allenheim
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  • Edgy_Elite
    Edgy_Elite1yr
    Commented

    Rah.

    What followed was thirty-two weeks of intensive training that, by the end, had me walking ten foot tall and more confident in myself than ever. And after basic, you are treated like a soldier. In fact, I like to believe you're treated more than a soldier. They treat you like a marine already, you simply have to earn the right to call yourself one, the right to earn that beret.
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    Mass Effect: A Hero Rises
    Video Games · hackwriter29
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  • Edgy_Elite
    Edgy_Elite1yr
    Commented

    Light, Sneak, and a skill that causes a vague sound to appear from a general direction that the user can control would be cool

    Ch 4 The Importance of the Team
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    Geek Apocalypse: All Hell Break Loose
    Video Games · AmateurTrainer
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  • Edgy_Elite
    Edgy_Elite1yr
    Commented

    Need more utility based abilities, light, minor heal, etc. More than just fighting, they gotta survive in the dungeon yknow.

    Ch 2 The Day Civilization Ended
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    Geek Apocalypse: All Hell Break Loose
    Video Games · AmateurTrainer
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  • Edgy_Elite
    Edgy_Elite1yr
    Commented

    The Outsider's abilities should be outside the universe, unaffected by anything within. But as Andrew is not the Outsider, I'd say his abilities have some effect, for now.

    Quick Question. Will Kamar Taj be affected when Andrew slowed time using Bend Time?
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    Marvel: Dishonored
    Movies · Dark_Vader98
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  • Edgy_Elite
    Edgy_Elite1yr
    Commented

    dont you mean... Invincible? i'll head out.

    And yet there it is, the fundamental force of the universe that can stop even light and time, as if it had no effect on me at all. And so I felt invulnerable!
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    Invincible! I'm Invincible!
    Anime & Comics · Navuhodonosr
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  • Edgy_Elite
    Edgy_Elite1yr
    Replied to Bryan_Growl

    weird. But I stand corrected I guess.

    Sage-"Guys, I will be fighting King Ice today. So stay far away from the battle ok.
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    Dragon ball Z: A True Saiyan
    Anime & Comics · Ozonelayer
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  • Edgy_Elite
    Edgy_Elite1yr
    Commented

    Depends on the plants nearby. If yall got guavas, guava shoots help with the stomach

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    The legendary Saiyan in a fairy's world
    Fantasy · NimtheWriter
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  • Edgy_Elite
    Edgy_Elite1yr
    Commented

    Tsunade is not the surname, the surname is Senju. So it would instead be either Tsunade Senju if you are talking about Tsunade

    "Yuuji, Tsunade Daren ordered you to retreat with your team!"
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    Godzilla In Konoha
    Anime & Comics · nyawdao2
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  • Edgy_Elite
    Edgy_Elite1yr
    Commented

    Even if he's a reincarnated individual, that is still his mom and dad. Would you ever say "Guys" to refer to your parents? Would make more sense to say "Mom, deadbeat dad" or something of that sort.

    Sage-"Guys, I will be fighting King Ice today. So stay far away from the battle ok.
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    Dragon ball Z: A True Saiyan
    Anime & Comics · Ozonelayer
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  • Edgy_Elite
    Edgy_Elite1yr
    Commented

    I get it now. Chrono Trigger. Funny.

    [Name: Xavier Trigger.]
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    Rewind System: Vampire Harem In The Apocalypse
    Fantasy · Renovator
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