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Thank 4 chap

The concept is good and it's readable but my main problem with this story is the ghost rider itself for a being who's only goal is to send any guilty soul it finds to hell the author turned it into a talkative, joke telling, teenager that's always complaining and sighing and to top it off the rider was the one who convinced the mc to join a team of heros not to mention the fact heros should've never let him join seeing as he has killed people and said he doesn't care and won't stop and batman just left and let him continue so my main problem is the author doesn't understand the basics of the characters he's trying to write and writes them in the most unbelievable way for the characters to act

Harem story without a harem is just weak this world has nothing special about it besides that you should've chosen a different anime to do. --------------------------------------------------------‐--------------------

Lol 'not many people like or know stars wars' you mean the most successful movie franchise till marvel end game ok bro I get it you lived under a rock your entire life. Esspecailly comparing it to young justice like young justice isn't a mid c teir show and isnt a reboot of a better show

I love all the halos before 4 but my favorite has to be halo 2

I liked it at first and it has some good concepts but I keep finding translation grammatical errors every paragraph. Its not terrible but there are a lot of little things that add up that ruin the feel of the whole story for me

Throwing the word slave around really casually when the only punishment the system ever said he'll get is it not working for a bit. What you mean to say is you just don't like systems and the fact that he uses it and every other criticism you have is that he isn't alpha enough when he has no power at all surrounded by beings that can kill him by accident this isn't actual criticism you just want the mc to have the mindset of a stupid 15 year old edgelord who just discovered Andrew tate

I hope deathstroke isn't offed quickly he's always been one of my favorite characters in dc

Even if he leaves his current world taking all the lord souls keep in mind darksouls has different timelines (that's how they explain other players) so ds2 and ds3 will still happen just not in his timeline

I think cyberpunk would be a good one do to how his powers is so different from what they have

Yeah there's no point in being in danmachi if he has no God there are plenty of other dungeon anime

I hope your done with the whole I'm afraid the nanites are going to take me over thing it was established nearly immediately that they can but don't want to and has been rehashed numerous times at this point that they don't want to yet it keeps getting brought up. This plot point has been solved multiple times now he worries more about the nanites that saved him multiple times and showed they could be trusted then he does about finding cat

thanks for the chapter

chapter 70 pretty much

So normally I wouldn't give 5 stars but it seems like a lot of edge lords have given this story bad reviews because he took on a guardian seal that the only negative effect is he can't kill kushina (his future wife) and its noted he's skilled enough to take it off at anytime (plus they offer to take it off if he wants) and in return he got access to the Uzumaki legacy (second best legacy in naruto), along with eventual access to the senju legacy (the best legacy in the nartuo verse) along with their protection and full access to their resources and full political support he's practically a second clan head. Now for normal people this is a deal that is unimaginably favored to him so it makes it esspecailly funny when I see the 15 year old edge lords come out of the wood work and get salty cause he took a great deal that has no actual negative effects because they need a mc that is the strongest in the verse at age 5, he's also got to face slap everyone, and get every girl before he hits puberty if you like that kind of trash ghostz has plenty of it go over and read his stuff. These people are why most of the books on this site are trash cause the edge lords try to project their trash taste to everyone else

A entire chapter that had about 30 seconds worth of conversation and the rest just has him thinkng of random unrelated unimportant topics in his head mid conversation I hate when stories blow past important things without proper detail or context but this is the opposite problem you could take out 75% of the mc's internal dialogue and it would very much improve the flow of the conversation and plot you should save the high levels of internal dialogue for when the mc is training or alone

Hashirama should only have half the capacity of the nine tails cause that's what he said himself he could beat the nine tails easily cause he had wood release which counters tailed beasts and madara put the nine tails on a genjutsu

Just because madara and hashirama beat the nine tails doesn't mean they have the same level of Chakra madara used the sharigan to control the nine tails that would be like saying obito has nine tails level Chakra cause he controlled the nine tails and hashirama has wood release which specifically counters tailed beasts . Hashirama's Chakra capacity should be around roughly half of the nine tails Chakra since he mentioned that naruto with half of the nine tails in him has about the same level of Chakra as him

Actually a somewhat decent story but the translation quality ruins it I would consider coming back if the translation improves besides that I have no current complaints