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I like the idea of adding a chaotic external element that he accidentally drags back from one of his worlds but it obviously has to be handled carefully but if done so I think it could add alot to the story

Though I dont think itd qualify as small but I think a perfect place for him to go at some point would be sekiro. The skills he'd get there would compliment is swordsman ship a lot and he'd get a bunch of interesting things like the mortal blade. Also it wouldn't be too OP. For a small game something like dead cells might be a good option.

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Thank 4 chap

The concept is good and it's readable but my main problem with this story is the ghost rider itself for a being who's only goal is to send any guilty soul it finds to hell the author turned it into a talkative, joke telling, teenager that's always complaining and sighing and to top it off the rider was the one who convinced the mc to join a team of heros not to mention the fact heros should've never let him join seeing as he has killed people and said he doesn't care and won't stop and batman just left and let him continue so my main problem is the author doesn't understand the basics of the characters he's trying to write and writes them in the most unbelievable way for the characters to act

Harem story without a harem is just weak this world has nothing special about it besides that you should've chosen a different anime to do. --------------------------------------------------------‐--------------------

Lol 'not many people like or know stars wars' you mean the most successful movie franchise till marvel end game ok bro I get it you lived under a rock your entire life. Esspecailly comparing it to young justice like young justice isn't a mid c teir show and isnt a reboot of a better show

I love all the halos before 4 but my favorite has to be halo 2

I liked it at first and it has some good concepts but I keep finding translation grammatical errors every paragraph. Its not terrible but there are a lot of little things that add up that ruin the feel of the whole story for me