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  • timbow
    timbow1yr
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    passionately is unreal, they talked for 3 to 5 minutes and she already started to love him?

    The nurse passionately kissed Sho on the cheek, and Sho froze up in shock.
    Tower Man
    Fantasy · JOSH_ONE
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  • timbow
    timbow1yr
    Commented

    if this was more dramatic, I would sympathize, but it seemed too straightforward

    Sho was slowly getting up from the floor, holding his bloody butter knife. He dashed forward with another scream coming out of his lungs, and he rammed the butter knife through his fathers back. Killing him.
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    Fantasy · JOSH_ONE
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  • timbow
    timbow1yr
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    Hey man, uzumaki. Where's Boruto,Kushina and Naruto?

    Mr. Kendo sighed, thinking, 'Sho Takahashi, a delinquent brat who loves to fight or pick fights, loves to insult everyone and doesn't take any kind of bullshit from anyone. Kell Uzumaki, a boy with good grades, popular all around school especially with the girls, but he's brutally honest, not afraid to tell you what your problem is with a smile on his face, and he's arrogant. I never thought two people of somewhat different caliber would be in my office, two students who have been talked about the most by teachers and staff. According to what I know about them, I'm surprised I'm getting no answers from Kell.'
    Tower Man
    Fantasy · JOSH_ONE
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  • timbow
    timbow1yr
    Commented

    The elder is trully elder

    Kosyin replied, "Old."
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  • timbow
    timbow1yr
    Commented

    Can you put this in the paragraph who the elder is cited?

    The old man : Carter
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    Fantasy · JOSH_ONE
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  • timbow
    timbow1yr
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    I saw that you had this book, so I will read it now, a lot of expectations even with few chapters, when I finish reading the current chapters I will update my story feedback

    Tower Man
    Fantasy · JOSH_ONE
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