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Zed_Ex10mthReplied to IceNinjaYTman, i loved reader. i wish it kept getting updated.
Astaroth walked in slowly, taking in the surrounding sights. Books. Books everywhere.- Zed_Ex1yrReplied to SILVER_CRYSTAL0811
The other guy was talking about a book being as good as or even better than solo leveling. I wanted the name of that book.
He was a transmigrator who had lived two very ordinary lives without much luck. - Zed_Ex1yrReplied to TrainingtobeHokage
Belated happy birthday. also mine is in 2nd, we should find people to complete the rest of the series.
February 2nd, the day after Victor discovered the changes in his body. - Zed_Ex1yrReplied to asfalpha
name?
He was a transmigrator who had lived two very ordinary lives without much luck. - Zed_Ex2yrCommented
if he was wearing the watch in the Nexus, then this makes no sense.
In the Nexus, however, Aldrich had thought he had spent at least ten or so minutes, indicating that time passed around half as fast as it did in the Nexus compared to the real world. - Zed_Ex2yrReplied to Yolo_Swaggins
I suggest reading the LN, the anime is a little rushed and skips a lot of minor things which i think makes the novel a good read.
The Nexus was a circular, temple-like room fashioned out of muted grey stone. It was sizable, easily the size of a two-story home and just as tall. At the center of the Nexus, there was a large basin of water swirling in a gentle spiral current standing atop a pillar engraved with carvings of armored fighters wielding blades and robed mages holding staffs. - Zed_Ex3yrCommentedCh 97 Ironman Triathlon
- Zed_Ex3yrCommentedCh 100 Demon Knight
- Zed_Ex3yrCommentedCh 99 To Kill or Not to Kill
- Zed_Ex3yrCommented
good work. I'm starting to notice small grammatical errors in the past few chapters. Since these are small mistakes you can either try giving the chapter and editorial read through after writing it or you can pass it through an online grammar checker like grammarly. MASS RELEASE WAITING ROOM DAY 1.
Ch 95 A Lovers Quarrel - Zed_Ex3yrCommentedCh 94 Friend or Foe?
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To the author, I just caught up. I really like this story and will keep supporting it for the time being, but I want to point something that has been bugging me out that the story keeps shifting from taking itself seriously and not taking itself seriously. The information and plot when it is related to Moby is pretty solid and is set up properly for any plot developments in the future. But when it comes to the other characters, how they interact and their motivations it becomes one dimensional. I understand that 90 chapters is not enough to actually flush out characters and have a good plotline and all the things I've pointed out can obviously be improved on as you release more chapters. Usually I wouldn't have pointed these things out but since I like the story and you have said that this is your first novel I just want to point out these things to you so that you are aware of it. Hope you write an insane story drip. Keep up the good work.
Ch 87 Confession