Great novel, with nothing but excellent dialogue that captivates and draws you into the world, unfortunately all this was ruined personally by some terrible choices. The first of which is the anti climactic death of his first love, which mind you is an OC. Most won’t like this, personally I didn’t either not because of them being OC but due to the lack of character development, an OC Whose only interiaction occurs with our Mc four times, before our emotionally needy Mc falls head over heal for her. Second and the worst yet is the sparing of Jamie Lannister, without giving into spoilers let’s just say he killed someone close very close to the mc in blood, but instead of killing him the mc spares him and sends him to the wall. I still cannot except how Stannis a stickler for rules was able to except this, it’s completely illogical and breaks all the narrative. But other than these it’s a great novel, with stable updates, and no gramatical errors, fantastic characters and emotionaly captivating dialogue, and just a fun read all around the first eighteen chapters are a just a blast. So if you have a spare time or bored give it a read it’s probably one of the best game of thrones fanfiction on WEBNOVEL at the moment. I’ll update this review in the future when the book is finished.

Your correct in the original anime sakumo is dead, but this is an alternative verse where sakumo is alive.

I just release a small part of the chapter, so you can read it, if I didn’t I don’t know how many edits I would have done. I’ll release the next part tomorrow.

Oh I just got do some PowerPoints for new hires about osha safety Guidelines.

What job interview?

That’s completely understandable bro, most people have that fear of the unknown. And a lot of people try to reconcile with this fear though religion. Still you really can’t be lead by fear, you have to come to an understanding of your self at some point. Don’t use your dreams as a distraction from your fears. Find your inward self.

There was also the monkey experiment you probably where they were able to successfully transfer the head without it dying, well for a short time anyway. Anyway why do you want to be immortal? Is not life a false gem passing from hand to hand, a deceptive image whose illusionary mirage have laid to waste many great men.

If I remember there was a study done which applied sound and frequency to heal cancer cells and it was successful.

Nikola Tesla suggested that to grasp the universe's workings, you should ponder energy, frequency, and vibration. He also majored in electrical engineering. So the key to immortality is probably frequency, since I remember reading an article about how words effect the shape that snowflakes take. Anyway your route in cellular study will probably lead to the same path.

Why would you want to study biology, your mostly likely going to be stuck in labs right?

I work as a supervisor, but I’ll probably quite and go to school next year to study engineering, what about you?

Facts, it kind lost its luster after leaving his mortal world, anyway I’ll have a chapter by next Friday, I unfortunately have to do dumm job meetins.

How far did you get in the story?

Hopefully he’s never mentioned again,

A much appreciated mature outlook.

Lol this is hilarious

Not at the moment, but if you want some villain mc stories, I would recommend [My Longevity simulation] on novel updates. It’s also on Mtlnovel.com

….Thats always a slippery slope to mediocrity

Jonathan really is too good for a fanfiction.

That’ simply romanticism of the villains way, never giving up is simply the repugnant glorification of fools… think how little is heard of the true rulers of our world. They hide in the shadow and are never seen or heard from... after all the greates trick the devil ever pull was in convincing the world he didn’t exist.