tupster29

Sorry to see it go, but thanks for not just leaving us hanging and for the story till now

Not a deal-breaker for me, but the Aztec god speaking spanish (the language of her peoples conquerers/the people who converted her people to Christianity) is really stupid.

Could just be me losing interest in the story, but feels like the last 10 chapters the MC's personality has devolved into a flat "manipulative genius with a paranoid streak". Don't mind an evil/amoral MC, but a boring one is where i draw the line. Hope this picks back up soon

Happy to have you back!

If it's just for plot and you want Riveria to be able to heal him later, maybe add a line for Finn telling her to conserve her mind in case whatever hurt Pyr follows them

+1

Great chapter dude!

thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter. Love the story so far, keep it up!