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So the real story starts after it goes premium? Yea ok.
Can't afford to kick them out, but no problem letting them die? makes all the sense in the world.
Like 5 lines ago the author wrote every child born after first light has superpowers.
Subpar writing, it amazes me how many 5 stars this story has. The story has no character development just some overpowered entitled MC's with the emotional range of a 3yrs.
Running off with another dude she has a crush on while having a husband is hoe behavior.
something wrong with you.
lol
I don't have any issue with the MC fighting in the pit. It's the reason he is doing that I find distasteful. A girl he doesn't know, or even know the name of told him to go fight in a death match, and he just meekly does what he is told. I'd think it was fine if it was Sahra telling him, but not random strangers.
If he had a reason to be cruel I would agree with you. But they just like Raas are being forced to fight by the dungeon. So he's being cruel just because he can, which isn't a flaw in his personality but a personality trait. As a reader I don't have a reason to hate these goblins, I want them to lose because I'm rooting for the MC. But I don't hate them, with that being my view point the unnecessary cruelty looks unnecessary to me.
Lying about it means he has to hide it. how is he suppose to learn to use it if he hides it? It should be one of his basic skills that he uses alot.