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I do apologize for the spelling but I use speech to text so the speech to text sometimes uses the wrong word because they're similar and I don't always catch it

not that you've done all this in the story are you going to have a Harry Potter accidentally discovered as well as discovering his living situation and land-based Dumbledore about it because having a the Emirates family save him from what's going on with the dursleys would go a long way

it might be better for him to be removed as a the Headmaster I'm not sure but one thing I'm sure of is that his control over who teaches what should be taken from him

I don't know how I feel about her not being able to see I mean it seems like something that could have been fixed very easily by that manifestation

is there going to be a power abilities list for the main character so that we can understand what she can do because it's looking like she ended up in the Fate world or many number of years before she was found by the consciousness of humanity

you're the one riding the book just do what feels right

and I have to say this every once in awhile I dislike speech to text but it's the only way for me to type right now

it seems like the Wizarding world is ending up with better technology than the Muggle world I mean they have holographic displays and smartphones in the late 80s early nineties where are we created smartphones and after 2000

did you change the name cuz I thought it was the Star Trek not the star path

I like these chapters but don't forget that Wizarding Britain Is Not the Only Magical community so they can sell to France America South America Japan their market for sale selling stuff is a lot bigger than just Britain because the magical population is in Britain is much smaller than in other places because of you know Voldemort