ok. this is just stupid. The System was already unnatural enough. You have a world like one piece with so much potential and add these unnecessary things to it. Not for me. Bye and good luck.

Ah that's what you meant. Might not have any obvious ones but neither does Luffy's fruit. That was his own application of the power. For example he might be able to learn to controll the crushed pieces. Basically crushes a rock and then can controll those pieces. Really depends of the author to make something out of the power. Choppers "Human-Human" fruit would also technically only turn him into a human like being. But due to his own abilities and skills, he developed the power of his fruit into something advanced. Again, up to the author how much freedom the MC has regarding the fruits powers.

Well, yeah. That's kind of the point. If your power is strong enough, you can stop literally anything. That's how power works. If Ace had strong enough Haki, he could have blocked Akainu, if Enel hat Armament Haki, he could have hit Luffy. I really don't see your point. If someones power is vastly superior to their opponent, then obviously now power will help the weaker person. Besides, he would also develop his own abilities which might match the haki of his opponent.

Wouldn't cook? Is that normal wherever this is playing? Never heard of such a ridiculous rule.

Yep, although it is stated to be very difficult. There are very few animagi because of the high requirements and risks involved.

I mean, you are not wrong but this is starting to feel personal. Had a wet dream about her or what? Haha. Nice story though. Stories which don't follow cannon to a T are very appreceated. They make it interesting and introduce more elements to the story that most people that read these stories already know anyway.

Isn't Crocus with Roger at the moment? He was Rogers doctor after all.

mixed it up here. 110 Million or 1.01 Billion? Said Billion earlier.

Did it not state in one of the earlier chapters that this Vista is around 6meters tall? In canon he is only slightly above 3m, so I thought he was an OC. Great story by the way. Has some nice World building and explanations while the MC is strong but not some random godlike Character. He will grow over the course of the Story which is nice.

It's indeed usefull when you look at it in the long time perspective. But currently he just startet out and could invest those 20k Points in something more usefull like subordinates, a weapon or anything else really. those Dungeon Points are like 2 days of grinding and he barely got anything out of this. If he made 100k DP a day, he could invest it in this Item but currently he used 2 days of grinding for an Item he can use once a day which made basically no immediate difference to his strength. That's a luxury item he can use when his income is high enough.

So just capture a couple of intruders and imprison them. Contrinous source of DP...?

Why is he bloody though? Literally a member of the Phenex family that should be able to heal almost all damage except for demon slaying, holy/light or god like attacks. And even with god like attacks that should only be proportional to the canon Riser. He really shouldn't not be able to heal from a hit of Tannin. Tannin shouldn't be that much stronger or even stronger at all. Only attacks far beyond him should be able to permanently damage Riser

The reasoning is rather poor i must admit. I mean the devils did loose a lot of population in the war and the aftermath but their fighting Power only increased with Sirzechs and Ajuka who are both in the top 10.Never really understood how the devils could stand up to heaven when god lived. He stood at the top equall of even surpassing Shiva. Yet Sirzechs who is 10x as strong as the previous Lucifer is ranked amongst the lower top 10... God never Took then serious enough to wipe them out. Was also probably occupied with Trihexa but still, should have been simple. Now no one can stand up to Sirzechs, Ajuka or even Riser within heaven or grigori...

just because he can think extremely fast doesn't mean he is smart. saitama simplifies everything to a bare minimum because he barely ever has any real Motivation. His hero score was also extremely low in the written Part, granted that he might have lacked the knowledge but still.

Rabbits have even lower intelligence but high breeding capabilities so nothing wrong with it.

Oh no… I feel the flow turning into a direction where it will focus more on relationships than on magic. Let’s hope my senses are just failing me. Let’s see in the next chapters…

He was told to prove himself against someone far superior who should by all right be able to use advanced magic. (MC did say he has an impressive aura and that’s coming from the guy who talked with kings and great mages in his past life) Should he hold back against someone that could easily vaporize him? He fought to his best ability just like he was expected to do. Why should he be at fault just because his mother uses something fat too strong aka an advanced spell when a intermediate would have done the job or when the strong mentor couldn’t contain the power of the 12 year old child and didn’t prepare any barrier or the like to protect the spectating people? Any stray attack could have killed one of them. I know this was set up to be some lesson but it’s so forced that it hurts to read this.

I don‘t get why he even entertains his tutor. He has all the knowledge he needs. Sure things changed within the last 500 years but even then his knowledge should let him quickly catch up with the help of the library or whatever future academy he will most likely attend. (Usually how these stories progress) also why a rare spell? He has far better ones in possession. At least now he can be deemed a genius without seeming like a monster in baby form. Got a feeling that spellcraft will be his main feature which will honestly be rather disappointing. I really hope it gets better in the further chapters. Not like the tutor decides anything for the son and heir of one of the four dukes of the empire. Also scholar? He would be duke, why even be a scholar? Probably has some good reputation but unless he becomes a great sage again then the position of duke would be better. Not like mage is an actual career job with the only alternative being a scholar. He would become Duke and he can easily also be a mage even if he wouldn’t be successful. Sorry for the long comment.

At most a couple weeks old and doing a massively complex activity… more like assumed he is possessed or a monster rather than a genius.

6 pound would be 120 soli, not 200. 1 pound = 20 soli.