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A young cultivator on the road to defying the heavens and claiming all woman under the sun!!
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this is terribly written, has no plot, is money and woman orientated plus the characters are as deep as soda bootle cup of water. maybe your other stories will be good but this is just trash. focus on character and story development more as this is just you telling us what's happening and not letting us read read it
I don't know how many Authors will create these very fake relationships just to have romance. At this point Kurenai is just there to boost Hiro's ego and their interactions are unrealistic and it gives the appearance as if they are spitting pre recorded line. then they is the fact that you lowered and made evey other shinobi with power just be fodder to see how great the Mc is. the story has potential but I feel like your not meeting it let alone acknowledging it. A strong MC does not mean everyone is a butterfly eater one face slap for you[img=faceslap]