BLACCMASS

There is nothing special about this story. It's your typical overpowered Harry Potter fanfiction. The author does a terrible job of writing characters and character interaction while still fumbling about and making an already well developed world background feel small and poorly created. If you enjoy wish fulfillment styled fanfiction with no real deeper plot then this is for you.

I'll try to explain this in as few words as possible. Everything is just bad, from the writing to the lack of proper character development. The author somehow took the fully fleshed out world of Harry Potter and made it worse.

reverse isekai? I see that I was a frog in a well comparing other novels to the might of senior brother author.

I get the appeal of a cautious MC but this is just getting ridiculous. hopefully it will get better as I read more chapters. + one slap of the face to the author because I'm petty[img=faceslap]

this is terribly written, has no plot, is money and woman orientated plus the characters are as deep as soda bootle cup of water. maybe your other stories will be good but this is just trash. focus on character and story development more as this is just you telling us what's happening and not letting us read read it

they is no plotline just spending money and talking to beautiful girls. author what kind of dog luck life are you living to write this wish fulfilling nonsense.

the character and story so far feels very hollow

I don't know how many Authors will create these very fake relationships just to have romance. At this point Kurenai is just there to boost Hiro's ego and their interactions are unrealistic and it gives the appearance as if they are spitting pre recorded line. then they is the fact that you lowered and made evey other shinobi with power just be fodder to see how great the Mc is. the story has potential but I feel like your not meeting it let alone acknowledging it. A strong MC does not mean everyone is a butterfly eater one face slap for you[img=faceslap]

it seems I've found gold[img=recommend]

I whole heartedly agree with this statement!