SnowRose

He literally just said he knew what the cafe was…

The ‘Binge Eater’ is S-Rank according to the data the CCG has. They don’t know that the Binge Eater is Rize. Rize is SS-Rank currently with potential to go higher. It’s like the bingo book from Naruto. Just because your threat level may be listed at a specific rank, it doesn’t mean that’s your power level. You could be holding back, have gotten stronger, or even weaker. So her public persona is S-Rank, her true hidden one is higher.

It’s one of those interesting things with online books vs physical ones. Obviously in a physical book not every page will be peak content. There’s going to be down times. So when viewed as a whole it’s doesn’t stand out and the down time can add to or build the story more as a whole. Most of the fanfics I read here a chapter reminds me more of a page out of a book rather than an actual chapter. From an entirely personal standpoint, some pages are boring and I just prefer long chapters, or the equivalent in multiple shorter chapters.

For me personally it’s the chapter length. There are a lot of chapters that feel short in content. Like dialogue, exposition, or a character’s thoughts which don’t move the story along in any meaningful way. Not to say it’s a bad thing, since it has its place in a story as a whole; and obviously not your fault. I just prefer waiting a couple weeks then reading multiple chapters so it’s more satisfying to read. If I read every day and not much happens 4 chapters in a row, I get bored. But if I read 7 chapters at once and it’s 4/7 instead it keeps the story interesting. Plus I just forget to use stones a lot…

This part doesn’t make sense no? It’s worded like she is surprised and seeing him for the first time but she’s already aware this is going on…

Sorry, no matter how much you try to make me sympathize with her, she’s dead to me.

What are these nicknames 🤦🏼‍♀️

I know I’m late but I hope that changes soon. When there are three Flamels in a scene and one gets called “Flamel” it makes things unnecessarily confusing. Best to use first names or full names when more than one is present.