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is this dropped?? ........................
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you need to proof read your story you get the pronouns wrong alot otherwise good story
give the Main character a name please ......
you need to keep your timeline straight in the last chapter you wrote weeks of using the branch but in this one you write 1 week
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work on grammar pls
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the story so far is good you just need to get the pronouns correct
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