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eliot_green5mthReplied to Daoist96s1k6Ch 22 Chapter 4- eliot_green7mthReplied to GenYase
He's only thirteen on a large body, plus I took note that he had no actual experience facing an enemy in a real battle except the ones with the trolls. I actually used this scene as a catalyst for some details in future chapters.
Undeterred by the orc's brutal assault, Thorwin parried the blows with skillful precision. The orc, not content with its bladed weapon, unleashed a powerful punch aimed at Thorwin's face. The impact was staggering, and the force of the blow sent shockwaves of pain through Thorwin's skull. But he refused to yield. Gritting his teeth, he retaliated with a punishing left hook, his fist connecting with the orc's grimacing visage. - eliot_green7mthReplied to Daoist96s1k6Ch 21 Chapter 3
- eliot_green7mthReplied to Daoist96s1k6Ch 21 Chapter 3
- eliot_green7mthReplied to Daoist444336
I love this too, maybe he'll wear one soon in future battles
Thorwin's mind wandered for a moment, caught in contemplation. He mused about the potentiality of his heritage, pondering whether it held secrets yet to be revealed. "It's intriguing," he thought, "that my ancestry might hold the promise of further growth." The prospect of adding a few more inches to his height in the coming years lingered in the corners of his thoughts, a curiosity that seemed to be a mix of wonder and acceptance. He paused, his thoughts shifting towards a recent chapter that had unfolded in his life. A touch of reminiscence graced his features as he recalled the process of acquiring new armor. "It's a blessing I didn't grow much this year," he thought, his mind momentarily settling on the practicalities of his physical growth. The replacement of armor, especially one as significant as his grandfather Anduin Lothar's replica, was no small feat. The armor, adorned with a majestic lion crest on the chest and intricate gilded patterns on the pauldrons, seemed to have become their family's legacy after his grandfather's passing. - eliot_green7mthReplied to GenYaseCh 21 Chapter 3
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Anduin's armor does look cool! I'll try to generate one for Thorwin, we'll see
Thorwin's mind wandered for a moment, caught in contemplation. He mused about the potentiality of his heritage, pondering whether it held secrets yet to be revealed. "It's intriguing," he thought, "that my ancestry might hold the promise of further growth." The prospect of adding a few more inches to his height in the coming years lingered in the corners of his thoughts, a curiosity that seemed to be a mix of wonder and acceptance. He paused, his thoughts shifting towards a recent chapter that had unfolded in his life. A touch of reminiscence graced his features as he recalled the process of acquiring new armor. "It's a blessing I didn't grow much this year," he thought, his mind momentarily settling on the practicalities of his physical growth. The replacement of armor, especially one as significant as his grandfather Anduin Lothar's replica, was no small feat. The armor, adorned with a majestic lion crest on the chest and intricate gilded patterns on the pauldrons, seemed to have become their family's legacy after his grandfather's passing. - eliot_green7mthReplied to Daoist444336
Yeah, a miniature version of that
Thorwin's mind wandered for a moment, caught in contemplation. He mused about the potentiality of his heritage, pondering whether it held secrets yet to be revealed. "It's intriguing," he thought, "that my ancestry might hold the promise of further growth." The prospect of adding a few more inches to his height in the coming years lingered in the corners of his thoughts, a curiosity that seemed to be a mix of wonder and acceptance. He paused, his thoughts shifting towards a recent chapter that had unfolded in his life. A touch of reminiscence graced his features as he recalled the process of acquiring new armor. "It's a blessing I didn't grow much this year," he thought, his mind momentarily settling on the practicalities of his physical growth. The replacement of armor, especially one as significant as his grandfather Anduin Lothar's replica, was no small feat. The armor, adorned with a majestic lion crest on the chest and intricate gilded patterns on the pauldrons, seemed to have become their family's legacy after his grandfather's passing. - eliot_green8mthReplied to Daoist96s1k6
This is a good point, yes, and I am going to add this in the future. Of course, druid magic is still unknown to him, and aesthetically speaking, I don't think Thorwin would want to shapeshift into animals. Also, mercenaries will be added in the future, I like your ideas but I really am trying not to pull things out of thin air, everything must have a cause or a reason to appear. I do also consider the timeline, he is a young lord, and he has his duties and responsibilities to act upon, so his freedoms are actually much restricted right now.
Ch 18 Chapter 17 - eliot_green8mthReplied to Daoist96s1k6
Your ideas are great, especially the ones with the dwarves, I have already considered them actually and to be honest, they already have a strong friendship with the Wildhammer clan, as for the Bronzebeards; I'll let Arthas have that kind of friendship. For the mercenaries, I don't think Thorwin will be able to do that, since he could just pretty much form a organized army rather than a band of mercenaries, plus I'd like to think that if they or anyone else had overstepped on their power, the other kingdoms would be keeping them in check.
Ch 18 Chapter 17 - eliot_green8mthReplied to Daoist96s1k6
I like this idea! Of course, learning in dalaran will be a part in the future but I would like to focus first on his paladinship. I'm honestly taking it slow, and it is pretty much hard to meet other races right now lore-wise, and I don't want to make it as if he could teleport everywhere, gotta have that realistic power scale or leveling.
Ch 18 Chapter 17 - eliot_green8mthReplied to LongSongGolden
Yep, when Draenor was shattered because of Ner'zhul, I don't want to kill any lore character yet, especially Khadgar who will be essential in the future.I had to make it so that they think he's dead, especially when the connection between the worlds were closed and thousands of orcs returned instead.
Ch 20 Chapter 2 - eliot_green8mthReplied to DuchessKolslawCh 20 Chapter 2
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