UnlawfulSoul
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then let me sexualize you đŚ that's just how it works
your balls hasn't even drop yet so continue suckling your toes
stop talking dumb shithead. Try saying that after you move out your mom's basement
you must be one of those manly-wannabes that can't even keep a job. definitely has no direction in life đ¤Ł
Is MC's city, Drondheim under the Kingdom of Swadia? I thought it was just from the system? So technically MC's people are more loyal to the Swadia than Drondheim?
I just can't understand why it needs to be repeatedly stated that he was happy about something then calms down after a minute then think about something or plan again after that he gets excited before finally returning to usual calm self but then get excited again...
How many times will he return to his usual self or calm himself? I mean, gosh, his emotions are very in disarray. đđđđđ Happy. Calm himself. Excited. Return to his usual self. Happy. Calm down. Excited. Usual calm self.
I'm just wondering, will the MC only depend on the system for the structures? Or an actual city construction, built from scratch, will happen? that will give more depth to the story tho.
You're a Leader, not a statue. What is so bad with showing positive emotions. Having cold appearance doesn't equate to effective governance.
"This place is now a lot safer with six Desert Bandits added" sounds better for me. Poor Swadia Militia and Recruits, invalidated just like that. lol
Well it can't be really said to be a plot armor, since the council hall is basically like a community centre/hall in real life where necessary stuffs for the community were placed.
MC lacks a bit on critical thinking. Any rational modern person will deeply think of different solutions when facing such dilemma. Therefore when facing such struggle the first thing you would lament over is what are the things you have. What are my available resources. And It was said that the MC doesn't have much so his choices to consider were only few so remembering those trees were so easy.
Is it just me or some dialogue between the supposed Lord's people/subjects lack respect or reverence? I mean, yes, the novel stated that they are loyal to MC since they are from the system but idk why I can't feel their loyalty.
Almost every paragraph ends with exclamation point. Am I the only one who can't help but put stress on the word/s đ
If I relate it to "Immortal Realm" the term "Robot" is too modern and, for me, doesn't kinda fit immortal fantasy setting I have in my mind. Maybe "Puppet" sounds better?