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Homia4ok

Homia4ok

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Novels and manga became a part of my life. I'm really glad I found Webnovel at that time.

2018-09-13 JoinedMoldova
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  • Homia4ok
    Homia4ok3yr
    Commented

    finally new chap~~~ I was checking the app every day for it UwU 🥰

    Ch 10 Upgrade
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    Reincarnated Into A Transformer In Cybertron With A System
    Sci-fi · GodsAre_Stupid
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  • Homia4ok
    Homia4ok3yr
    Commented

    brooooo, we need more chaps ;-;

    Ch 9 The Escape
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    Reincarnated Into A Transformer In Cybertron With A System
    Sci-fi · GodsAre_Stupid
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  • Homia4ok
    Homia4ok3yr
    Posted

    ok. so starting with the plot: it is good. It's not smt exceptionally new, but it's interesting. Character development is also ok, as the number of chapters is too small yet. What i didn't like are the grammar mistakes, though they are not that serious, there's a lot of small "typo"s and mistakes. hmmm, that's pretty much it. oh, the world is also ok, basic fantasy setting u could say. nicely done, author, but I'd recommend either an editor, or just a person with good grammar tp check and instruct u on what ur mistakes are. 🖤🤍🖤🤍🖤🤍🖤🤍🖤🤍

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    Goblin General
    Fantasy · Nekoman
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  • Homia4ok
    Homia4ok3yr
    Posted

    Very goodu plot, very goodu writing style. Author is also very goodu. Need more chaps, and the rest is goodu. Author, gib more chaps!!! 🙂🙃🙂🙃🙂🙃

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    A Wizard's Romance
    Fantasy · _Daulla
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  • Homia4ok
    Homia4ok3yr
    Replied to Snoodle_Booper

    sorry xD. But i promise, the quality of the story changed a lot compared to before. I think you'll like it more :3. Ans some parts were changed too~~

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    deleted.2.3.4
    Fantasy · Homia4ok
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  • Homia4ok
    Homia4ok3yr
    Replied to darklight_248

    I planned on starting rewriting all chaps from september :3 U'll have to wait until I manage to finish em, then some more time until I make a small reserve of chaps (5-10) Just leave the novel in the collections, and u'll get a notification :3 Really happy ppl are still interested in what i wrote. Thank you all, it is really heartwarming!!!

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    Fantasy · Homia4ok
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