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SkarKrow

SkarKrow

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2018-09-12 JoinedSwitzerland
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  • SkarKrow
    SkarKrow2yr
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    Thrust -> trust

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    My Second Chance In The Real World
    Fantasy · Nemo_404
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  • SkarKrow
    SkarKrow2yr
    Commented

    Thighs -> Things

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    My Second Chance In The Real World
    Fantasy · Nemo_404
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  • SkarKrow
    SkarKrow2yr
    Replied to SkarKrow

    Nevermind, definitely is supposed to be written this way

    Prolog - how it all began (part 1)
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    Reincarnated as the Villainess's attendant
    Fantasy · Sound_Hammer
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  • SkarKrow
    SkarKrow2yr
    Commented

    Is the word Prologue supposed to be written this way?

    Prolog - how it all began (part 1)
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    Reincarnated as the Villainess's attendant
    Fantasy · Sound_Hammer
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  • SkarKrow
    SkarKrow2yr
    Posted

    Good, for the first 11 chapters. Writing is good, grammar is good. not much else to say currently

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    Reincarnated Into The Worst Otome Game
    Fantasy · Emeruferuu
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  • SkarKrow
    SkarKrow2yr
    Commented

    There's Richard

    Ryan and Professor Kal both turned to look at their four companions. Laura, Ben, and Richard were all staring on silently, Laura had seen the devil worm before on that horrible night she wished she could forget forever, Ben had been told by Ryan about its existence, and Richard, as quiet as always, stared on with wide eyes. Professor Treffle on the other hand, was very vocal in her astonishment.
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    Professor Kal
    Fantasy · Mungknut
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  • SkarKrow
    SkarKrow2yr
    Commented

    Where's Richard? I thought Ben, Laura, Ryan and Richard came. Pretty sure Kal even makes Richard and Laura set up tent.

    Ch 46 Explanations
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    Professor Kal
    Fantasy · Mungknut
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  • SkarKrow
    SkarKrow3yr
    Posted

    Not much to say, just want the book to get picked. There's just too little to criticise or praise. It seems good if you like the concept of this book.

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    I Just Won't Play By The Book
    Eastern · 7 Percent
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  • SkarKrow
    SkarKrow3yr
    Commented

    Scars is a plural form of the word scar, so you have to use plural forms of verbs in conjubction with it. I suggest you put your chapter onto a grammar checker like grammarly, so you can see if there are any grammar mistakes and correct them. Sometimes it might highlight things that aren't mistakes though.

    Ch 2 Area 21
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    Lavander's Battle Scars
    Urban · loreenaces3
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  • SkarKrow
    SkarKrow3yr
    Replied to SkarKrow

    Also, any difference between this and "Princess' Guardian's Memories"?

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    Princess's Guardian
    Fantasy · Hutchison_Writing5
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