SkarKrow

Thrust -> trust

Thighs -> Things

Nevermind, definitely is supposed to be written this way

Is the word Prologue supposed to be written this way?

Good, for the first 11 chapters. Writing is good, grammar is good. not much else to say currently

There's Richard

Where's Richard? I thought Ben, Laura, Ryan and Richard came. Pretty sure Kal even makes Richard and Laura set up tent.

Not much to say, just want the book to get picked. There's just too little to criticise or praise. It seems good if you like the concept of this book.

Scars is a plural form of the word scar, so you have to use plural forms of verbs in conjubction with it. I suggest you put your chapter onto a grammar checker like grammarly, so you can see if there are any grammar mistakes and correct them. Sometimes it might highlight things that aren't mistakes though.

Also, any difference between this and "Princess' Guardian's Memories"?