Atomicmass3693
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Atomicmass36934mthCommentedunrelentlessly is a double negative, so it is the same as saying relently as to relent or give up, unrelenting or relentlessly would be correct here. this isn't a complaint about Grammer, just an FYI if you are trying to improve.
She was stronger than Itachi, of that he had no doubt. Which was why he refrained from clashing with her head on, but she being smart and understanding her advantage pushed on unrelentlessly.- Atomicmass36937mthCommented
it was good
Speaking of which, how was it? Good? Bad? Any criticisms? (about the writing, not what was written) cuz this is my first time, so idk if it's shit or not. (If any of you masturbated to or because of this, let me know, I'd take it as one hell of a compliment :3) - Atomicmass369311mthPosted
good ggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
This book has been deleted. - Atomicmass36931yrCommented
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Vote here for having POVs in separate chapters when we have more than one - Atomicmass36931yrCommented
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I don't care, just give me a new chapter - Atomicmass36932yrCommentedCh 433 A Tacit Understanding Between Two Kings