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I just have a question. If you kept getting hit by a rock by someone repeatedly would you forgive them? I know I wouldn't. Everything else is fine but a simp MC is just annoying to read.

Did he lose his system functions for good? It's corrupted and hasn't fixed itself yet. I mean MC without system is still alright but the system makes it earlier to track powers and status.

But did the MC lose his instinct skill for real? The win feels hollow with his skill gone!! Please someone tell me it is just sealed and will be back!

Story is awesome but the chapters 13 onwards are all disjointed. They seem to be skipping chapters in between as they don't connect to the subsequent chapters. 13 to 14 makes no connection and then 15 also feels stranded like what's going on? When is it? Where the sorting? Where's the first day at Hogwarts? These are also all missing!

Yeah, I read till ch 85 but was getting frustrated because Zoro was making no visible progress. He is also still stuck being a 6 yr old. And if haki spreads to others than I just wouldn't like it. It's like the story is stuck. It's not actually an action main story but a slice of life at this point. But the problem is that even if it was slice of life if it focuses on Zoro's training then it'd be good but it shifted from Zoro to Toji as the MC. It's stupid. It had a lot of potential but took a wrong turn just like Zoro.

What name is it and where are you reading it? This one has only 44 chapters right now? Can you share the link?

Everything is cool but what's wrong with dragon ball manga in it? Some Chinese manga in place of THE dragon ball manga? Also power level of rewards are haphazard some could break the story in Naruto world while some are useless. I mean rng is god that's okay but world altering rewards could be given out in batches of tiers. I also like the idea of akamaru continuing as a pet as garurumon through the reward. That option of reward fusion was nice. But then Kurenai and asuma got a complete digimon. It's unbalanced. It's like an intelligent system which evaluates the needs and then gives out reward. But other cases shows it's not so. Story has a lot of potential but the ups and downs has to be managed properly otherwise it will soon break the story and then we wouldn't know where to go from there.

Everything is actually fine. Not bad. But the way description of events or characters or the very narration is very hard to read. Like describing the leader giving orders as bulma directing others or like the MC yawning like Goku yawning after waking up. Once or twice is ok but if every action or event is described this way then it loses its originality or uniqueness. It's loses its charm. The author can have this thought while writing but it can't just be mentioned to the readers like that, right? The author has to actually describe it objectively how the things are happening and not compare everything to something in DBZ especially if it's not broly but the leader doing something! I loved the novel initially but somehow I am losing interest in it as we progress in the story. Plot and story is fine but the writing quality has to improve.

Did it get dropped? Why isn't there any updates?

It is filled with stupid grammatical errors in the paragraphs and even the titles. If it simply was hard to understand then it is still readable just like most MTL but this one is plainly writing wrong things just like titles like Death of Tang San. It says death of Tang San but that never happened. Story is certainly good but writing quality is too bad. Can't read it.