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Easier to make them seem intelligent when it is important..Remember that the MC cannot be brighter than the author 😅

Author, why bring Love and abandon Catherine i do not get it ?

she probably got herself killed by now...

12 years Old..

please do not use the word smart for this MC 🙂

Thank you !!!!!!!!!! I will root for you till the end ! 🤩

Overall a very good story with lots of potencial. Just one problem with the writing.. open a dictionnary and find the definition for intelligent.. then please never associate it with the MC again. Thanks

dumb dumb dumb...

please make him souffert quickly so as to stop this rubbish

A little mistake in my opinion. If he gets rilled up from panic for alina and doesnt even read the whole text at first why does he have time and energy to get angry for something that he got for free ? The speed at which he mentally claims proprety of the system is too fait and the emotions are displaced i think