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Incarnuz2mthCommentedIts INFURIATING reading all these sentences ending with '...'. It DESTROYS the flow of everything. Worse of all, they're EVERYWHERE! EVERYWHERE!!! STOP! Warlock of the magus world lost a ton of readers by never using anything other than exclamation marks, don't do the same stupid mistake. STOP USING ELLIPSIS.
I pretend to be a normal girl... A normal girl with many friends... A completely normal girl... Just to avoid falling into despair and going completely crazy.- Incarnuz5mthCommentedCh 119 Chapter 119: Imperial Censor Chen Cant Bear Me? Enter The Palace And Meet The Empress!
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uh huh
'By my tail blade am I heavy.' - Incarnuz5mthCommented
oh fks sake
He sped up to catch up with the herd of Mammoths. He knew better than the Devils that the next time they met up with him he would be even bigger and stronger. He had not bothered with it before, but maybe he should try to find a way to get a human form. It would be a good way to blend and allow him to enter cities to buy things. - Incarnuz5mthCommented
Please don't.
They were not going to risk their food when their would be easier prey to hunt. When they were gone Talos exhaled as he had used his Sword Intent for the first time in his monster body was exausting. - Incarnuz5mthCommented
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
'Why Sasuke is a female in this world?' Naruto asked himself in utter shock and disbelief. - Incarnuz5mthCommented
pffbtbffgt he got a lisp? Thensei asfbfbfbtftt
"Shinra Thensei!" (Almighty Push) - Incarnuz5mthCommented
Is the MC mario? Another day another a nothing
"Ah~ Another day without a nothing in sight," sighed Logan, leaning against the ship's railing at the front of the deck, stretching his limbs in response to the sea breeze. - Incarnuz5mthCommented
Yamato.
"Let Tenzou deal with the out-of-control Naruto." (Tenzou, codenamed A, was a member of Root and is directly under the Hokage) - Incarnuz5mthPosted
What was written in 76 chapters I could write in 3. The amount of water (or useless text) in this story is about the same as the Earth, actually probably more since earth is only 71% water and this feels like 95% filler. If you think naruto was bad, then boy are you in for a treat. Its SUPER slice of life, MC is still level 1 @ch76, barely dungeon dives. Only decent thing about it is grammar tbh. Below average tbh.
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???
"With my every wellbeing..." Hong Guan took a deep breath and nodded firmly. - Incarnuz5mthCommented
So the MC doesn't know this world but he knows what a familia is huh
"Ohh, then how about we form a familia? A nice little group of adventurers." Lars thought about it. - Incarnuz5mthCommented
Special Jonin. Not tokubetsu jonin, SPECIAL JONIN.
—I'm really sorry, sir, but the bonuses for live deliveries only apply to tokubetsu jonin, jonin, and kage levels, as they're the ones with access to valuable information. Elite chunin and below are essentially cannon fodder who don't know anything important. - Incarnuz6mthCommented
Yo, put !!! at the end of every sentence, its not enough like this. Maybe even go "System!!!!!!!! open the !!!!!!!Atribute Panel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" like this, looks better.
"System, open the Atribute Panel!!!" After collecting the magic stones from the ground, Aston sat cross-legged and rested in silence. - Incarnuz7mthCommented
"For the love of Kami" is the most CRINGE thing EVER. Just stick to english.
"Here, drink up!" I heard Ino speak from beside me, she didn't run the full 50 laps so she should have rested a bit by now, I for the love of Kami couldn't figure out why the blond had been trying to be my friend, it was confusing at first but then I accepted this weird relationship as the new normal. - Incarnuz7mthCommented
Do you mean sauerkraut or sakura?
[Hidden Quest Rewards: +1000 EXP, +300 Reputation {Iruka} -100 Reputaion {Saukra},+100 Reputation [Sasuke], +100 Reputation [Rest of the Rookie 9], + {Beginner Fuinjutsu Skill Book}. {Collect}] - Incarnuz7mthCommented
he got reincarnated with hunger and thirst maxed huh
Hunger: 99/ 100 Thirst: 100/100 - Incarnuz8mthCommentedCh 87 Chapter 87: The Uchiha's Alms