Solhiend

necromancer? not neuromancer?

TLDR: story great, still need improvements in certain areas. WRITING QUALITY is great: 5stars STORY DEVELOPMENT needs a bit more direction, mc feels like aimless still in chp.30: 3stars CHARACTER DESIGN (3stars) needs more development on original characters & mc, assistant girl is still assistant girl in my head and not love interest at this point. again, mc kinda feels aimless to me. i mean sure pursuing the path magic and what not as next step is noce and all, bit what's next? what happens after that? UPDATING STABILITY (1 star) started fine with a day in between breaks in updates, now 2weeks updates. sure, it's nice that it's not dropped. but it doesn't really inspire confidence or assurance that ot won't be dropped if the interest of the audience wanes. WORLD BACKGROUND (4 stars) almost everyone knows of G.R.R. Martin's IP so doesn't really need much effort in improvements. this is honestly the first time i made a review, so sorry if I rambled a bit (or a lot)

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