mindaugask1

Actually gold. It's even free to read. This book is the best this site has to offer. My favorite aspect of the book is the world building. The author knows how to please my addicted brain.

As a reader I wouldn't like a rewrite of this because I think the story is fine as it is - there is a clear goal and everything looks fine. I would like this to be story first and then smut. Mc is fine. I think the heavy theme was handled pretty well and as long as no major f*cku** from your part happen it's fine. I stayed for the decent writing and plot,but came for the smut. So idk everything is on your shoulders now. Loved the story and the writing style. Keep up the hard work