Djkennyken

Loved the reference. Hope we get more

No offense taken. I played all the games when they came out. I was commenting about how kept all the weapons, instead of abandoning them broken on top mount olympus( not including the blades).

For infamous I say go the hybrid mode. It explains why they have powers and the exosuits act as restraints so they don't get cocky. For Fallout go wild. There are aliens/mutants/children of atom. As long as you base the powers on the wasteland. An example would be a sane ghoul learned to harness radiation to power up ( discount Hulk) or a person got infected with the ev virus and instead of turning into a chimera/plant monster got Poison Ivy's abilities.

I say post it here. It leaves you space if you want to do a different story and you can easily go back to see what you want to change or inspiration.

Wonder what life be like when they escape.

I love that you kept the original weapons as ties to his past. I hope you let Zelos make them better. Imagine if he takes the chisel and combine with the blades or turning all his weapons into soul bound armor for Kratos called the redemption of Olympus

Great story binge read it in one day. For the points why don't you keep going on the path of a hex warrior. Get basic speed and durability. Then save the rest of the points for upgrading like better danger sense or fighting skills (nerfed concertation breathing) like you said power through skill not going super sayain

Good chapter, but what was the cause of the [center] ... brackets happening in the chapter

missing some chapters. otherwise good work

Love the redemption arc. I can't wait to see he continues to grow.