dyed_princess
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beautiful, incredibly lovely and a die hard fan of good lecturesI am also a Christian
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dyed_princess1yrCommentedhi, I've been reading your story for a while and love the story. The story ine is good and the characters interesting. I would like to ask, if you need any help with the proof reading and even a little bit of editing. I would like to participate in the writing of such a good story, if you'll allow me.
Aster saw a middle-aged man pointing at everyone with a firearm which model was not something a normal person should have; next to the man the guard of the bank was laying on the ground unconscious and bleeding.