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I love reading this story and love rereading it. I have reread it several times and the author pointed out he didn't mind and even appreciated the fact when I pointed out some oversights. because that's simply what these are oversights. I have read this book since it started and have read all other books from this author so it wasn't meant in any kind of negative way. however I can realize that is what it came across as if that's the first comment you ever saw of me in this book. but enjoy your read of this story. I sure did!
Here is to hoping you will release more chapters soon :) even though i just reread every single chapter i never get enough of this story.
and being one of the guardians.
"but is willow really your soulmate?"
"she continued to use her powers to heal the wounded .."
You have to two times. "you are doing something you want to make sure she is alright, (you had a different sentence, i know but it doesn't show the text when i want to place a comment. Its just that you used a double to in this sentence "to just to"
I think a double negative is a positive .which would mean they could be taken lightly? but I might be wrong!
it would allow..... to be appeased. or will but also with appeased .. at least I think so... 🧐
I think you might not want to use the word assume here .. more like stick too your choice or you better do as you just promised me 🤔🧐
"they finally were relieved$