I like the way the story spinned. As the story progressed, I noticed there are still a lot about shu meng to come out. the grammar and continuity is adequate. I would love it if more actions are to be written in the following chapters to come. And also fpr shu meng and her brother in law to learn a lot to become martial artists for them to fight all through out.

Sometimes ignorance and stupidity judges how low iq a person is. Essentially lower than lowest. It should be taught to all generations not to judge anyone and not to look down on anyone regardless of their appearance. We should learn what is the true meaning of life.