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Susu131

Susu131

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2018-09-06 JoinedAustria
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  • Susu131
    Susu1311yr
    Commented

    What kinda speedy-ass child birth is common were you are from mate. 2-10h is normal.

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    I am not Cyborg (Old)
    Anime & Comics · king_frosh
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  • Susu131
    Susu1312yr
    Posted

    I like how you started the story and am kinda disapointed it has stoped beeing updated. I and probably many other people would be delighted for it to be continiued.

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    Superwoman In Smallville [GL]
    TV · SupermanFanBoy
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  • Susu131
    Susu1312yr
    Commented

    +1

    four
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    HYBRID IN TEEN WOLF (ON HOLD)
    TV · Hela698
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  • Susu131
    Susu1312yr
    Commented

    +1

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    Reborn as Thor!
    Anime & Comics · Ghost_84
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    Susu1312yr
    Commented

    +1

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    Reborn as Thor!
    Anime & Comics · Ghost_84
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    Susu1312yr
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    +1

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    Rory's Ascension
    Anime & Comics · The_Sheep
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  • Susu131
    Susu1312yr
    Commented

    Third person seams detached so maybe for sidecharacters but keep it in thirst for the mcs

    Q4) Is writing in POV's to your liking or should I try third person point of view?
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    WHEN I GOT REINCARNATED AS A SPIDER WITH MY GODDESS
    Fantasy · Noel_Elitia
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  • Susu131
    Susu1312yr
    Commented

    Its a little dark but fits perfectly

    Q2) Is the plot and character development enjoyable or not?
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    WHEN I GOT REINCARNATED AS A SPIDER WITH MY GODDESS
    Fantasy · Noel_Elitia
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  • Susu131
    Susu1312yr
    Commented

    Its an amazing story and really well writen

    Q1) Are you enjoying this novel and the story line as it is proceeding? (You are free to shower your praises if you feel like doing it)
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    WHEN I GOT REINCARNATED AS A SPIDER WITH MY GODDESS
    Fantasy · Noel_Elitia
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  • Susu131
    Susu1312yr
    Commented

    Delay the heartbeat and tada a corps

    Delay. It allows her to delay everything within a range of 2 meters around her. Simple usage, but powerful nevertheless.
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    MHA: Infinity and Deception
    Anime & Comics · Spirits_everywhere
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