Zytax

I really am starting to dislike the Prince and saintess, they are so emotionally selfish. when it comes to Elyssia it feels like all they do is take. they want to own her rather than be with her. maybe I'm being to harsh, but they have no self control, and that always ends up hurting Elyssia

fucking masterpiece of a name

almost gave me a heart attack. with all the setup for additional worlds, with all the setup for the future Naruto world, ending it right here, before one of the most Iconic battles in Shippuden, it would have been a travesty.

romance for the chimeras? awesome. love this story

this story is amazing, but the casual cruelty is off putting. Maybe it's just a character flaw, or a cultural thing, or just a normal character trait she's developed from her upbringing. Amazing writing. I love it. If you have a patreon with advanced chapters I'm definitely buying in.

that was brutal.

This story is fun to read. This story isnt amazing, but it is fun. The main character is strong, lazy, mischievous and bloodthirsty. This story has funny parts, some sad parts, and heartwarming parts. it's also pretty short. If you're looking for something to kill about 3 hours, that's entertaining, then I recommend this.

I enjoy this story to a moderate degree. it has interesting elements that I am quite partial too. the main thing I focus on when I read a story is the characters. the characters in this story are missing something. they're not as engaging and in depth as they could be. relationships between characters feel rushed, and shallow. they dont feel alive. I do like the world building in this story. the gods are varied, and seem like well thought out characters, who suffer from god complexes(duh). they feel relatively substantial, as characters. they have long histories, and that shines through in some of the little details. the world itself seems unique when compared to other stories of this genre. there are somethings that could be fleshed out to make the world feel more lived in, but overall its interesting. my final gripe, the M.C. the m.c is an assassin, as far as the system says, but in reality they are a wizard with stealth capabilities. I came into this story with some expectations. I hoped for a ruthless m.c who wield both magic and blade to kill their enemies. the M.C, atleast in the begging, seriously ignores the assassin title. she kills her enemies yes, but with stealth and magic. she might as well just be a scout, or thief. She specs hard into magic from the begging, and her assassin class is used almost purely for stealth capabilities. this isnt bad per say, but I was repeatedly disappointed as she specced more and more into magic, completely neglecting physical skills and abilities juthat should come with being an assassin. the story isnt bad. it has good points. can be dark and gritty when necessary, and fluffy when expected. some things feel a bit rushed, and some characters can feel lackluster. I'm not sure about the posting consistently of the author as I bulk read the story, and let chapters stack after reaching a certain point...

Noice