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behold people you can see a rare kind of a person who seem to apply real world logic to a fantasy/fanfiction world where radiation can give you random super powers.XDXDXDXD
WTF!!! she doesnt need even 20 min to go back on full chakra. broken as hell XD
what the hell is ghost dao?
bro come pls if you gonna include danzo at least stop making him so repetitive. he appears so many times and says exactly the same thing its really getting on the nerves
the word count get smaller every chapter soon the author will post 100 words a chapter. for me its going downhill really fast. my suggestion is to take some time to write bigger chapters because it's really unsatisfactory reading it as it is right now.
overall i like it my only dislike is ottos constant talks of superiority and evolution its just too much for me personally because it is repeated too often but that just me. anyway good work waiting for more.
Hello author here. just wanted to let you know that as i'm quite new as an author and a really want to complete this Fanfic i will be taking my time with writing it. As for release schedule my plan is to at least release one chapter every week like lets say every Saturday. thanks for reading and i would like to hear about your opinions about the story
my plan is to release at least one chapter every saturday. i want to take my time with this
no he is native
yeah that the plan at least and i would be a single female