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My answer to you was censored too so i will resend It. P-Word it's not just a negative side in a work, it's something unacceptable to me, it has absolutely nothing to do with the author's work and how much effort he put into his work I accepted those disgusting chapters as a mistake on the part of the author, I wouldn't stop reading because of those chapters, what made me stop reading was Roan's relationship with a little girl he raised and watched grow up. If you think it's acceptable for a man over 1000 years old to have a relationship with a girl Calina's age then read on, I don't think that's acceptable and I hope other people who think like me read my Review before start reading this work. I didn't want spoilers and as I trusted the author because of his past work I didn't see the Reviews, I regret that. He's just another one who fell into the popularity trap of this site, sick people with strange fetishes.

My first comment was censored so i will repeat without the P-Word. It seems like your memory is terrible, come on, when Roan met Calina she was only 10-12, when a normal old guy sees a little girl grow up and even raises her this man would never think of her as anything more than a child, how Rean and Roan look at Malaka I expected it to be the same with Calina but I saw Rean making Calina get naked to try to impress Roan and I understood that you had lost your hand, you wrote a scene with a child becoming naked to impress an old guy with another old guy planning it. So I was curious to know if you would have the courage to make her and Roan have a relationship... If it were, I would just leave this novel as quickly as possible and unfortunately you made it. You even made them to have a child. It's disgusting too much for me. I wasted time and money on this novel and I was loving it, but it is unacceptable for me, I have a 2-year-old daughter and I would hate for a 40-year-old guy to do what Rean did to Calina. This is not a joke, that Rean's answer to Malaka about shiping showed that you forgot the age difference between Roan and those girls. Once again it's proof that you don't even know the novel that you made, you must have forgotten, but I'll remind you that you made Rean go to a war zone and kill unknown people if they attack him, well it was a war zone, attacking strangers is what everyone would do, the Rean who you said that cares about people's life didn't care about that. In your mind it seems like he was just defending himself, but it didn't make any sense, it's like breaking into someone's house and hoping they don't attack you and don't say that they attacked children, even in the real world a soldier would kill a child if he was carrying a firearm in the middle of a war zone, even more in the cultivation world. He went to a place with the intention of killing unknown people who did nothing to him. He's not even a morally normal person, a normal person would think twice about taking advantage of other people's suffering for personal gain, I'm not saying they wouldn't take advantage, but at the very least they would have a little hesitation but Rean doesn't hesitate. For me there were 2 possible reasons, his past life he didn't have empathy because of the Gem Soul or the soul connection with Roan made him colder. I loved too much "Is that a Wisp?" that I simply accepted that it was your choice to make Rean cold-blooded. Honestly, I just found the difference between your two novels strange, but it doesn't matter, you are a good author your last novel proved it because of . "Is that a Wisp?" was incredibly relaxing, following Krune's story was fun and unlike other authors, you hadn't given into the weird fetishes of the readers of this site yet. I may have said something wrong, but I'm not going to spend more money to keep reading this novel and see that I'm wrong, you know what you wrote and if you have a minimum of character you'll understand that those "Washing" chapters was disgusting and unnecessary you just gave what these sick people love to read on this site.

what a horrible response to a review of your work, congratulations, it showed that he is right. Just by your comment I can be sure that you are a terrible writer

Complaining about something you don't like is still writing a review, I would start reading this work if he hadn't said that the MC is a pervert.

you forgot the thousands of times the author said how handsome he is.

people should say how many chapters they read before in their Review, I can understand if someone gives this work a good rating in the first 100 chapters. But who read more than that should know that it's a mediocre work with so many plot holes and so much fillers that doesn't even deserve a 3.0.

No, it's not, the author misled readers with the name of the work and the synopsis Lin Yuan is not a Merchant and this story is not about Feys.

lol the Author has the memory of a mouse, he makes some statements like "she wanted Lin Yuan to lose and she would be free" and soon after that he says "she wants Lin Yuan to win because if he loses he will kill her." And this is just one of the many times this has happened and I've just resigned myself to it. It's so difficult to read good works that I'm simply accepting anything that isn't completely unbearable

Pedophilia it's not just a negative side in a work, it's something unacceptable to me, it has absolutely nothing to do with the author's work and how much effort he put into his work I accepted those disgusting chapters as a mistake on the part of the author, I wouldn't stop reading because of those chapters, what made me stop reading was Roan's relationship with a little girl he raised and watched grow up. If you think it's acceptable for a man over 1000 years old to have a relationship with a girl Calina's age then read on, I don't think that's acceptable and I hope other people who think like me read my Review before start reading this work. I didn't want spoilers and as I trusted the author because of his past work I didn't see the Reviews, I regret that. He's just another one who fell into the popularity trap of this site, sick people with strange fetishes, I even saw him include something like rape and aphrodisiac...

I know that someone will come to defend this novel and defend the author but I want to make it clear that you won't affect me, I created this account so I wouldn't be persecuted when I give a bad Review. I don't say anything on my main account to avoid being persecuted or banned.