winspear

it's Jon

is it 2 different departments

It is a very interesting story. The character development and world creation are very good. Love reading it

too many mistakes in character names and pronouns. Also the the lines are jumbled in some places

good story waiting for the later part [img=recommend]

Rong Qingtian

thorn

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

is it jehanne or Lutheran. in the last chapter she was called jehanne

isn't it supposed to be Yu Huang