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DawnAme

DawnAme

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fashion design student doing my bachelor's. mama of 3 soon to be 4

2018-09-03 JoinedNew Zealand
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  • DawnAme
    DawnAme1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 53 Are You Done Causing a Scene?
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    Raising My Children With My Personal Spatial Ability
    Urban · Slightly Attractive
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  • DawnAme
    DawnAme2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 40 Hit The Jackpot
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    Raising My Children With My Personal Spatial Ability
    Urban · Slightly Attractive
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  • DawnAme
    DawnAme2yr
    Commented

    I believe the word you are looking for is saliva not silver

    The two of them did not take his words to heart at all. Their moist lips parted, bringing out strands of silver.
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    Sensational! The Crippled Mister Gong Is A Big-Shot
    Urban · Happy Happy
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  • DawnAme
    DawnAme2yr
    Commented

    love the story so far, a few mistakes bit it's overall easy to read and doesn't take too much away from the story. however your pages seem to short make them slightly longer please

    Ch 24 80 Million Yuan
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    Daddy CEO's Beloved Wife
    Urban · Poisonlily
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  • DawnAme
    DawnAme2yr
    Commented

    please fix the name its confusing. is it Shi Xi or Shi Qian?

    Gu Fei wanted to chase after Shi Qian and Zhong Weiyu when they left, but Tian Mi stopped him.
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    My Clingy Husband
    General · sss
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  • DawnAme
    DawnAme2yr
    Commented

    love the argument, it's easy to picture. please find someone who can read and help you correct your spelling mistakes and grammar .

    Ch 16 If I call An Ran ugly then what are you? Great Grandfather of ugliness?
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    Sweet Doting Husband: Sorry, my Wife is a little Crazy
    Urban · SamikshaRav
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  • DawnAme
    DawnAme2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 16 If I call An Ran ugly then what are you? Great Grandfather of ugliness?
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    Sweet Doting Husband: Sorry, my Wife is a little Crazy
    Urban · SamikshaRav
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  • DawnAme
    DawnAme2yr
    Commented

    question should be answer

    And as Chen Meng'er wrote one question after another, Principal Chen's heart could not be described as surprised. He looked at Chen Meng'er who was seriously working on the question, then looked up at Chen Ping who was drinking tea with his head lowered. His mouth opened and closed, but in the end, he swallowed the question he wanted to ask. 
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    Reincarnation: I Have Always Been Rich
    Urban · Ai Guo
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  • DawnAme
    DawnAme2yr
    Commented

    kneel should be where you have written knowledge

    Then, she adjusted her posture to make her knowledge on the stone bench more comfortable. She held the pencil, lowered her head, and started to do the test. 
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    Reincarnation: I Have Always Been Rich
    Urban · Ai Guo
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  • DawnAme
    DawnAme2yr
    Commented

    please read carefully. you have written the name of the new husband and not the cheating scumbag here

    Of course, according to the author, Bai Rong also felt conflicted and did not really want to snatch away Fang Mo'er's man. However, she had been helpless to resist Shi Mo's sincere advances towards her.
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    Excuse Me, I Am The Real Female Lead
    General · It Is I, The Real Queen
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  • DawnAme
    DawnAme2yr
    Commented

    the start should be After calming down, Song Ning continued,

    After calming down, Song Ning said, "My eardrum was perforated, and for a long time, my hearing was impaired. I had a concussion; every movement made the world spin and I felt nauseous. During my time in the hospital, apart from the doctors and nurses, no one came to visit, not even my mother. I remember attempting to commit suicide time and time again, but I was saved again and again. One day, Ms. Yun Yao came to see me; it was our first meeting. She said she was a friend of my mother and brought me to see my mother. As it turned out, my mother didn't come to visit me was because she had suffered a miscarriage. She was four months pregnant with a baby boy when Su Tong's son bumped into her stomach. Just like that, my younger brother was gone before his life even started."
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    Sir, How About A Marriage?
    Urban · Jie Ru
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  • DawnAme
    DawnAme2yr
    Commented

    doorbell? do you mean schoolbell 🔔

    After the doorbell rang, the class teacher entered the classroom with a name list and smiled at everyone. "A competition sponsored by the International Mathematical Olympiad will be held in A Town. Our school will be sending two students to participate, and by luck our class managed to get a place."
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    Forensic Doctor, Moe Wife
    Urban · Passion Honey
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  • DawnAme
    DawnAme2yr
    Posted

    although the plot line is interesting, I am struggling with the mistakes that constantly come up in the grammar. going from granddaughter to grandson or he and she same with daughter and son. Please make sure to write, read and edit properly thank you. Otherwise I am enjoying the book.

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    The Torturous Survival of Transmigrating into a Female Cannon Fodder Character
    General · Ajaylor
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  • DawnAme
    DawnAme2yr
    Commented

    granddaughter. please read

    "Do you want to go to the kindergarten to take a look? There's no rush. Wait until Mom takes you to meet your relatives. Don't worry, Chuchu is my granddaughter. As a grandmother, how could I not love my grandson?"
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    Transmigrated as the Tortured Female Lead's Daughter
    General · A Crescent Moon
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  • DawnAme
    DawnAme2yr
    Commented

    please re read your work and edit it properly .

    Ch 10 Chapter 10: The Heroine Has Awaken (1)
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    Transmigrated as the Tortured Female Lead's Daughter
    General · A Crescent Moon
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  • DawnAme
    DawnAme2yr
    Commented

    isn't it daughter not son?

    The servant led Gu Manxi and her son to the dining hall.
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    Transmigrated as the Tortured Female Lead's Daughter
    General · A Crescent Moon
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  • DawnAme
    DawnAme2yr
    Posted

    enjoying the plot and the style of the storyline. definitely want to continue reading this story. the building of the characters is very intriguing 🤔

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    I Transmigrate as a Single Mother of the Three Antagonists
    General · Wen Xiao
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  • DawnAme
    DawnAme2yr
    Commented

    where is the rest of the sentence Artemis?

    Everyone stopped what they were doing. Their eyes t
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    When Love Blooms Finally
    Fantasy · Artemis_Rae
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  • DawnAme
    DawnAme2yr
    Commented

    do you have someone to help with your spelling and grammar? I like the story but I am struggling with following the story due to the errors in the story.

    Ch 9 *Note*
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    Rebirth in the 50's
    Urban · salamontyy2
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  • DawnAme
    DawnAme2yr
    Commented

    modern

    All of a sudden , a tall building much like the moder skyscrapers in my old world , came to my vision . It's about a hundred floors if I'm not wrong.
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    Rebirth in the 50's
    Urban · salamontyy2
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