over all, the story sucks. the translation is not even completed, and the grammar is pretty bad. over all, the story sucks. the translation is not even completed, and the grammar is pretty bad.

+1

thanks

i'd prefer kyoka

Honestly, i've rarely ever found such a good quality ff that is also so regularly updated before. its fairly unique, and the few common troupes are fairly well hidden or not central to the story as many other stories would have it...

you could do a parallel story...

I'd prefer this...

sauce?

Bruh, does nobody remember Mia Grand (Mama Mia) who a full blooded Dwarf? She is the "Built like a brickhouse" woman from the Hostess of fertility...

I thought Author-san was setting it up for Naruto to end up with Yakumo...

i'm sad that you're letting the cooking skill die...

"Carl, How many times did you stab the human in the chest!!??"

Fem!Haku is best girl. I won't accept that she's a guy! But, Ino is the next best after Haku.

yes

This story needs to be continued for a long time. It's a very reasonable and realistic take on bnha.[img=update][img=recommend] I don't understand why people don't like this story.

shoulda gone with black and purple

Them Chinese novel versions of monparas

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This is a very beautiful story, in my opinion. I've only ever seen one other minecraft crossover fanfiction this good before. And the other was a minecraft/mlp crossover.[img=update]

Ok look, I know this is your story and what not... But, you need to have at least a close up of your Character if you want to be putting pictures of them in the comment section. Whether or not if it is due to not being able to describe, or laziness...