too much words used to describe the scene or the plot, thus making the story long. the reader becoming bored on the author's flowery words.

what happen...? where are the next chapters?

where is the update?

very very long time to update.

still waiting for thenext chapters to release

good story developement, but alot of typo error. and wrong word use, eg. seize is to capture while cease is to stop. the author should use cease/ ceasure not seizure.

is the author dead? (knock on wood) its been to long ...wheres the chapters to finish this?

gu jingze had given away jingyu's whereabout to their mother to get rid of him. 😂😂😂