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What about height? Isint space measured in cubic meter or something
The story feels heavily AI-generated, especially in the dialogue, which comes across as stiff, unnatural, and not how real people actually speak. Conversations feel overly structured and lack spontaneity, making it hard to stay immersed. There’s also a lot of repetition in both narration and character behavior, with the same patterns and internal analysis looping without adding much depth. The protagonist’s overly mechanical, system-like approach further removes any sense of genuine human interaction, which makes the story feel flat.
If the paper split in half, than air also will be her Attribute. Right?
It is good and kind of different from other systems. The idea of this kind of system is fun. Overall, the story is good.
He is basically a child now
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The magic only allows him to transform into a beast form.