more thank you

thanks for the chapter

hey author, is everything fine?

The story was going good until the author started the new bit, scrapped the whole story basically and made him restart from nothing which a crappy start. I hate the new bit which is why it is rated so low.

Honestly, this could have been a good book, but I'm sorry to say this Author but you cannot write at all. No character development, no world development, and worst of all, even though what you write in english makes sense, your phrasing makes it seems like english is your fifth language. I recommend making a plan before you start writing your book, make a timeline and then re-read what you write with detail and expression. Not just YELLING every 3 seconds because you don't have enough vocabulary to compensate. A good way to fix this issue is to know a word of which you would place in the spot and find synonyms on the internet. Good luck with your writing.

love this, word count matthers though, so good job author. love the detail.

can he merge the eyes together and then get an ultimate sharingan that has all the "would be" mongekyo abilities and for the sake of saying, this is useless to me, he crushes the ultimate eye. and then cuts the moon in half?

4 emperors POV next chapter?

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more chapters?

Bro they are still his parents whether second or not

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Sorry for my ranting

I don't think so, I kinda like the idea of instead of the MC being nice to konoha even when from other villages in other fanfics, this one wants his village to grow which makes it although seem nationalistic, is also loyal. you also have to understand he has grown up in this village and was not placed in a body of a teenager or adult.

Thanks for the chapter

morrree

Thank you for the chapter Author, can't wait for the next few chapters

next chapter please

atleast it wasn't dragged lmao[img=exp]

More please Author